The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. 

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  • DingNan
    University: Jilin university
    Nationality: china
    May 19, 2022 at 7:11 am

    The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. 

    It is sometimes argued that the effects of the evolution of globalization. Personally, I reckon that this change has affects almost every aspect of our lives, and it has both advantages and disadvantages.

    Regarding its benefits, globalization has enriched our lives, people can taste all kinds of exotic cuisines taht were not availbale before, and can easily fly abroad to appreciate marvelous scenery of foreign countries. Besides, with the establishment of more international enterprises as well as the development of international logistics and trade, more job opportunities are provided and more revenues are created. Lastly, the globalized world also makes people more open-minded and inclusive because they have to live in multicultural society and cooperate with others from different backgrounds.

    Speaking of its drawbacks, firstly, the advent of giant multinational giants has brought fierce competition, and they can dominate/occupy the domestic market of many countries without difficulty due to their price and technological advantages. Conversly, many native firms would find it tough to make profits and cannot survive, and some local industries cannot develop. Secondly, globalization is absolutely detrimental to the preservation of traditions. People tend to choose some universal goods, like McDonald’s fast food or Hollywood big-budget movies/blockbuster instead of some conventional cuisines and domestice films. However, the gradual loss of traditional things will lead to the loss of multiculturalism and this change is not only harmful, but also irreversible.

    In conclusion, I completely admit that/ fully acknowledge that a more open world is really conducive in lots of fields, but people should also pay close attention to the potential negative effects it may bring.

     

    May 21, 2022 at 3:10 pm

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    DingNan
    University: Jilin university
    Nationality: china
    May 30, 2022 at 11:45 pm

    It is sometimes argued that the effects of the evolution of globalization. Personally, I reckon that this change has affected almost every aspect of our lives, and it has both advantages and disadvantages.

    Regarding its benefits, globalization has enriched our lives. People can taste all kinds of exotic cuisines that were not availiable before, and can easily fly abroad to appreciate marvellous scenery of foreign countries. Besides, with the establishment of more international enterprises as well as the development of international logistics and trade, more job opportunities are provided and more revenues are generated. Lastly, the globalized world also makes people more open-minded and inclusive because they have to live in multi-cultural society and cooperate with others from different backgrounds.

    Speaking of its drawbacks, firstly, the advent of giant multinational giants has brought fierce competition, and they can dominate/occupy the domestic market of many countries without difficulty due to their price and technological advantages. Conversely, many native firms would find it tough to make profits and cannot survive, and some local industries cannot develop. Secondly, globalization is absolutely detrimental to the preservation of traditions. People tend to choose some universal goods, like McDonald’s fast food or Hollywood big-budget movies/blockbuster, rather than some conventional cuisines and domestic films. However, the gradual loss of traditional things will lead to the loss of multi-culturalism, a change that is not only harmful, but also irreversible.

    In conclusion, I completely admit that/ fully acknowledge that a more open world is really conducive in lots of fields, but people should also pay close attention to the potential negative effects it may bring.

    May 31, 2022 at 12:46 pm

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