Time spent on smartphones and tablets, by category. IELTS Task1
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March 11, 2020 at 2:51 pm
Time spent on smartphones and tablets, by category.
The pie charts compare the changes in attractions of different online activities for smartphone and tablets users. Overall, it is evident that users spent most of time on games and social networking in both electronic products.
Games play a predominant role in time that users spent on smartphones (35%) and tablets (57%). Then the second largest proportion in both devices ascribes to social networking time. Users spent nearly twice as much time on it on smartphones than they do that on tablets. Similarly, users spent more time on utilities on smartphones than on tablets.
By comparison, for activities like music and videos, news and other, smartphones users spent a little less time than tablet users. 13% of time consumed on tablets is spent on music and videos, while smartphone users only spend 8% of their time on that. Time spent on news accounts for 3% of all on smartphones and 4% on tablets. The percentage of time spent on other activities is 5% for smartphone users and 8% for tablet users.
March 13, 2020 at 2:25 amScore: ungraded
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March 13, 2020 at 7:52 amThe two pie charts present the change in attractions of different online activities for smartphone and tablet users. Overall, users spent most of the time on games and social networking in both electronic products.
Games play a predominant role in the time that users spent on smartphones (35%) and tablets (57%). Then the second largest proportion in both devices ascribes to social networking time. Users spent nearly twice as much time on it on smartphones than they do that on tablets. Similarly, users spent more time on utilities on smartphones than on tablets.
By comparison, smartphone users spent a little less time on music and videos, news as well as other activities than tablet users. Tablet users spend 13% of their time on music and videos, while smartphone users only spend 8% of their time on that. The time consumed on news accounts for 3% of all on smartphones and 4% on tablets. The percentage of time spent on other activities is 5% for smartphone users and 8% for tablet users.
March 17, 2020 at 1:25 amScore: 76.8
Final Revision
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By comparison, smartphone users spent a little less time on music,
andvideos, news, as well as other activities than tablet users. Tablet users spend[ tense error ] 13% of their time on music and videos, while smartphone users only spend[ tense error ] 8% of their time on that. The time consumed on news accounts for 3% of all on smartphones and 4% on tablets. The percentage of time spent on other activities is 5% for smartphone users and 8% for tablet users.March 19, 2020 at 8:09 amThe two pie charts present the changes in attraction of different online activities for smartphone and tablet users. Overall, users spent most of their time on games and social networking in terms of both electronic products.
Games play a predominant role in the time that users spent on smartphones (35%) and tablets (57%). Then the second largest proportion in both devices ascribes to social networking time. Users spent nearly twice as much time on it on smartphones as they do that on tablets. Similarly, users spent more time on utilities on smartphones than on tablets.
By comparison, smartphone users spent a little less time on music and videos, news as well as other activities than tablet users. Tablet users spent 13% of their time on music and videos, while smartphone users only spent 8% of their time on that. The time consumed on news accounts for 3% of all on smartphones and 4% on tablets. The percentage of time spent on other activities is 5% for smartphone users and 8% for tablet users.
March 21, 2020 at 12:20 amScore: 76.5
Final Revision
The two pie charts present the changes in/concerning the attraction of different online activities for smartphone and tablet users. Overall, users spent most of their time on games and social networking in terms of both electronic products.
Games play a predominant role in the time that users spent on smartphones (35%) and tablets (57%). Then the second largest proportion in both devices ascribes to social networking time. Users spent nearly twice as much time (on it on) [confusing ] smartphones as they do that on tablets. Similarly, users spent more time on utilities on smartphones than on tablets.
By comparison, smartphone users spent a little less time on music and videos, news as well as other activities than tablet users. Tablet users spent 13% of their time on music and videos, while smartphone users only [ misplaced ] spent 8% of their time on that. The time consumed on news accounts for 3% of all on smartphones and 4% on tablets. The percentage of time spent on other activities is 5% for smartphone users and 8% for tablet users, respectively.
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<div class=”fp-reply__thecontent”>The two pie charts present the changes concerning the attraction of different online activities for smartphone and tablet users. Overall, users spent most of their time on games and social networking in terms of both electronic products.
Games play a predominant role in the time that users spent on smartphones (35%) and tablets (57%). Then the second largest proportion in both devices ascribes to social networking time. Users spent nearly twice as much time on social networking on smartphones as they do that on tablets. Similarly, users spent more time on utilities on smartphones than on tablets.
By comparison, smartphone users spent a little less time on music and videos, news as well as other activities than tablet users. Tablet users spent 13% of their time on music and videos, while smartphone users spent 8% of their time on that. The time consumed on news accounts for 3% of all on smartphones and 4% on tablets. The percentage of time spent on other activities is 5% for smartphone users and 8% for tablet users, respectively.
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</div>March 21, 2020 at 10:11 pmHi, there is no point to revise this essay further. Start a new essay.
