TPO 73 Though people nowadays know and care more about health, the problem is, is it more challenging or easier for people to maintain good health today?

While I can see Claire’s point that compared with the past[ unclear writing ], [ the ] economic growth has brought us a gratifying and healthy lifestyle, I align with Paul’s perspective that due to the increasing development of technology, individuals are more susceptible to unwholesome activities.[ wordy, unclear sentence. Split it.  ], As mentioned by Paul, with[ unclear preposition ], convenience introduced by cell phones and computers, citizens are prone to living a sedentary life, doing less outdoor physical exercises, eating more high-calorie and nutrition-deficient foods, so as to reduce the likelihood of maintaining health.[ lengthy, unclear sentence; split it into two ], Apart from what Paul has raised, I add that in comparison with the generations in the past, youngsters endure pressures in their personal and professional lives, which undermine their mental health, contributing substantially to a person’s health.[Lengthy, unclear  ], Given the above reasons, it[unclear article  ] is undeniable that individuals in the contemporary era have more difficulty in gaining a healthy life.