TPO25 Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities

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    University: Southeast University
    Nationality: China
    October 29, 2019 at 1:13 am

    TOEFL Writing Topic: Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.

    Nowadays, it seems that young people communicate little with people living the same community. They go home from work or from school, walking straight back to their apartment, without saying a word to their neighbour, nor will they offer help to their communities. There are a lot of factors contributing to the phenomenon.

    Foremost, the young generation are busy with their work so that they can not spare time to help. With the advent of modernization, employers are seeking for high-end talents and professionals, thus creating a much more throat-cutting job market than before. As a result, young people have to exert themselves absorbing knowledge.

    In addition, citizens today needs less help from their neighbour. For instance, if parents are busy at work and cannot pick their children up in time at the kindergarten, they don’t need to ask their neighbour for help. Because most of the kindergartens offer the service to take after children until their mothers or fathers come and take them home. Children can play with teachers and friends safely, waiting without anxiety.

    What’s more, some of the young people are addicted to the virtual world and are unwilling to communicate with others. They surf on the internet and play video games all day long, feeling embarrassed to talk to people in the real world. Take my cousin Dean for example, he used to be shy and wordless as a little boy. When he grows up, he still doesn’t dare to make friends with others and locks himself in the bedroom, relying on Twitter and Ins to make so called friends.

    From the analyses above, it is safe to conclude that, young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities because they are busy at work and citizens today needs less help. Of course, some of the young people don’t help due to fear for communications. Anyway, there is no need to blame young people for less help to communications, every generation has different life styles.

    October 29, 2019 at 1:24 am

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