TPO37 Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well.
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October 12, 2019 at 3:42 pm
TPO 37 TOEFL Writing Topic: Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well.
In this ever-changing society, people want to involve in more stuffs yet in a shorter period. It seems that everyone has the ability of handling multiple tasks overnight. I cannot tell since when we stop focusing on one topic at a time. As far as I am concerned, human cannot split their concentration to do various activities to increase their efficiency.
People nowadays seem to become busier than ever, but it only makes their life get worse. They complain about ten seconds of the elevator’s operation, five minutes of waiting for the instant noodles, and eight hours of the working time. In daily life we can see a lot of people being busy with several things at the same time. Young students listen to music while they are doing homework. Workers watch movies or TV show when they are having lunch or dinner. In this way they fail to go deeper and figure out the meaning behind the music or the movie, and also fail to set up the scientific capacity by doing academic practice or find love and care by making use of the precious lunch and dinner time.
If we judge them by the appearance, we might think busy people are quite successful. However, we overlook the most important point that successful people enjoy the process of every part of life. They do right thing and do it slow, because they love what they do. That is the reason why they can always do things well, as they focus on doing what they love. People with wisdom do not care about the number of things they have to do. They keep things in perfect order and start with the most important task. That is the difference between outstanding people and ordinary people. Ordinary people are busy doing many different things and worry about some of which will not end well. Hesitation and distraction eliminate their possibility towards success.
October 14, 2019 at 9:35 pmTPO 37 TOEFL Writing Topic: Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well.
Score: 72
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Lin Qiu
October 15, 2019 at 9:04 amWriting topic: Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
In this ever-changing society, people want to involve in more stuff yet in a shorter period. It seems that everyone has the ability to handle multiple tasks overnight. I cannot tell since when we stop focusing on one topic at a time. From my perspective, a human cannot split their concentration and do various activities to increase their efficiency.
People nowadays seem to become busier than ever, but it only makes their life worse. They complain about ten seconds of the elevator’s operation, five minutes of waiting for the instant noodles, and eight hours of the working time. In daily life, we can see a lot of people being busy with several things at the same time. Young students listen to music while they are doing homework. Workers watch movies or TV shows when they are having lunch or dinner. In this way, they fail to go deeper and figure out the meaning behind the music or the movie and also fail to set up the scientific capacity by doing academic practice or find love and care by making use of the precious lunch and dinner time.
If we judge them by appearance, we might think busy people are quite successful. However, we overlook the most crucial point that successful people enjoy the process of every part of life. They do the right thing and take their time because they love what they do. That is the reason why they can always do things well, as they focus on doing what they love. People with wisdom do not care about the number of things they have to do. They keep things in perfect order and start with the most important task. That is the difference between outstanding people and ordinary people. Ordinary people are busy doing many different things and worry about some of which will not end well. Hesitation and distraction eliminate their possibility to success.
