If you go traveling to a city for the first time, but you only have a limited amount of time, which place you will choose? Choose one from the three options. 1. Touring the historic sites 2.Go shopping on some markets 3.Go to the restaurants or cafe.
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May 21, 2020 at 7:45 am
If you go traveling to a city for the first time, but you only have a limited amount of time, which place you will choose? Choose one from the three options. 1. Touring the historic sites 2.Go shopping on some markets 3.Go to the restaurants or cafe.
Along with the public transportation advancing and the citizens’ living standards improving, in contemporary society, the short-term travel has been more and more frequent and convenient in our daily life. When it comes to the most reasonable destination during a short-term tour, among historic sites, some markets and restaurants or cafes, everyone has divergent viewpoints. Nevertheless, personally, the historic attractions will be the optimal option during a tour if I only have limited time.
First of all, historic attractions are the easiest and most convenient measure to assist us get into the swing of local customs and traditions. To be specific, the grand and time-honored buildings and delicate antiques displayed in historic sites will may make it possible for us to immerse ourselves into a pleasant and mysterious expedition. During the course, we will meet native people and communicate with them about the local habits and traditions. Besides, in these historic landscapes, numerous traditional craftsmen will display their gorgeous skills and manufacture a variety of artifacts we can’t witness in any other places. For another thing, as the rapid process of globalization, a vast majority of museums and attractions possess language services to help us remove the linguistic barriers.
Furthermore, heading for historic sites will expand individual horizons and understand the knowledge not imparted in classes. Elaborately, it is difficult for students and adults to really know a region or country in tedious textbooks. On the contrary, if we can view and touch real substances or sites by ourselves, we will break away from stereotypes and then gain a real and full global picture. For instance, in classes, you may consider Africa as the poverty-stricken and desolate region. When you witness pyramids and sites of Mesopotamia Civilization, however, you will be astonished by the ancient origin of human. The Great Wall is another example, we all know it is the sixth marvel in the world, but as long as you see and touch it by yourself, you will smell the blood and sweat and then realize the hardship of ancient wars.
May 25, 2020 at 1:14 amScore: ungraded
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May 25, 2020 at 3:37 amAlong with the citizens’ living standards improving in contemporary society, short-term travel has become more frequent in our daily life. When it comes to the most reasonable destination during a short-term tour, among historic sites, some markets, and restaurants or cafes, everyone has divergent viewpoints. Personally, the historical attractions will be the optimal option during a short-term tour.
First of all, historic attractions can assist us in getting into the swing of local customs and traditions. To be specific, the time-honored buildings and antiques displayed in historic sites will make it possible for us to immerse ourselves into a pleasant and mysterious expedition. During the course, we can meet native people and communicate with them about local habits and traditions. Additionally, in these historic landscapes, numerous traditional (artisans) will display their gorgeous skills and manufacture a variety of artifacts we can’t witness elsewhere. For another thing, language virtually is the toughest issue for foreigners to insight into local cultures. Fortunately, as the rapid process of globalization, a vast majority of attractions provide language services to help tourists remove the linguistic barriers. I firmly believe that people will have an enjoyable period in historic sites.
Furthermore, heading for historic sites will expand individual horizons and understand the knowledge not imparted in classes. Elaborately, it is difficult for students and adults to know comprehensively a country through tedious textbooks. On the contrary, if we can view real substances or sites by ourselves, we will break away from stereotypes and gain a real and full global picture. For instance, in classes, you may consider Africa as the poverty-stricken and desolate region. When you witness sites of Mesopotamia Civilization, however, the ancient origin of human beings will catch your eyes. Besides, you may marvel at its grand wall when you view pictures of the Great Wall. However, as long as you see it by yourself, you will smell the blood and sweat and then realize the hardship of ancient wars.
May 29, 2020 at 9:33 pmInvalid [ Please complete one essay prior to submitting the other one. I am too busy to work on two essays for one student at the same time. ]
