Universities should require every graduation student take public speaking courses.

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  • Piaoyudong
    University: XISU
    Nationality: china
    March 21, 2020 at 7:31 am

    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should require every graduating student to take public speaking courses. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.

    Public speaking, the foundation of a quality university studying life, has been valued and even triggers a heated discussion over whether university should require student to take public speaking courses. Do not taking public speaking courses, in some people’s views, continues to be an effective way to them. Contrary to these people’s opinions is my perspective that we definitely should take public speaking courses, due to the contributions to personal development and study.

    What must be prioritized is that taking public speaking courses, instead of objecting to it, is actually beneficial to students’ academic learning, by offering them more knowledge and triggering their enthusiasm in learning. To begin with, it is speaking courses that provides students with access to a large quantity of expertise about speaking. In detail, through speaking classes, students can acquire a wide range of knowledge which can help them negotiating with others; in contrast, such a large amount of knowledge cannot be obtained when students just take their required course.

    Moreover, never can we ignore the significance of public speaking courses to students’ personal development. To explain it further, it is well-acknowledged that speaking courses, students can practice their communication skills. Specifically, only in speaking courses, will students gather together instead of sitting behind their desk and have an excellent speech about life, honour, dreams and stuff. Finally they can get better tactics of socializing. On the contrary, under no circumstances will they interact with such amount of people to talking about these meaningful topics if they don’t attend to speaking courses.

    Academic performance, the foundation of students’ future development, will be boosted when they taking public speaking courses. Personal development, essential contributors to students’ future success, will be facilitated if they’re willing to take speaking courses. To conclude, only by taking public speaking courses, instead of only taking the required courses and selective courses which university required you to attend, can students reap numerous benefits.

    March 23, 2020 at 10:23 pm

    Score: 42.4

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