The university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way? 1)providing a room for quiet study 2)building an exercise room 3)providing entertainment place(watch film)
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February 3, 2020 at 3:39 pm
The university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way?
1)providing a room for quiet study
2)building an exercise room
3)providing entertainment place(watch film)Today due to financial and practical reasons, a lot of university students tend to choose living on campus- in the students dormitory. In order to update students life quality in dorms, many universities take a lot of measures, be it offering quiet rooms, setting a gym or building rooms for leisure time. In my opinion, among all these choices, the most beneficial one for the students would be arranging special space for entertainment.
The entertainment area can offer students a perfect chance to wind down. Nowadays, college students always have extremely hectic schedule and they need to juggle academic research, part-time job, after-class activities and romantic relationship in the same time. In this case, usually they would feel exhausted and stressed out after a whole day of study when they come back to their dorm. In this time, the entertainment place can give the students an opportunity to have fun, get away from their daily routines and loosen up a little bit.
Apart from having a place to relax, the special place for people to enjoy them-selves by watching movies, playing table games like chess and porkers or chatting with each other can help students to get to know each other and make new friends. In fact, students living in the same building but not the same room seldom talk to each other, but during the process of playing games and watching movies in the same room, they will talk and communicate with each other might become close friends. With a larger social circle and more friends, students’ life quality definitely will be improved in this aspect accordingly.
Admittedly, a quiet room and a gym are also important to students who live in the dorm. However, compared with an entertainment room, quite rooms can only guarantee the fundamental need of sleeping rather than raising their life stander, and the gym could be a waste of money for students who don’t like working out.
In conclusion, among all possible choices of university, building a place for students to have fun would be the best choice to enhance students’ life quality.
February 3, 2020 at 5:41 pmScore: 59.9
Issues:
- Nearly 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
February 4, 2020 at 2:40 amToday due to financial and practical reasons, a lot of university students tend to choose yo live on campus- in the students’ dormitory. To update students’ life quality in dorms, many universities take a lot of measures, be it offering quiet rooms, setting a gym or building rooms for leisure time. In my opinion, among all these choices, the most beneficial one for the students would be arranging certain space for entertainment.
The entertainment area can offer students a perfect chance to wind down. Nowadays, college students always have very hectic schedule. They need to juggle academic research, part-time job, after-class activities, and romantic relationship the same time. In this case, usually, they would feel exhausted and stressed out after a whole day of study when they come back to their dorm. In this time, the entertainment place can let students to have fun, get away from their daily routines and, loosen up a little bit.
Apart from having a place to relax, the place for people to enjoy themselves by watching movies or playing table games like chess and porkers can, to some extend, help students get to know each other and make new friends. In fact, students living in the same building but not the same room seldom talk to each other. However, during the process of playing games and watching movies in the same room, they will talk and communicate with each other and may end up becoming close friends. With a larger social circle and more friends, students’ life quality definitely will be improved in this aspect accordingly.
Admittedly, a quiet room and a gym are also important to students who live in the dorm. However, compared with an entertainment room, quite rooms can only guarantee the fundamental need of sleeping rather than raising their life stander, and the gym could be a waste of money for students who don’t like working out.
In conclusion, among all possible choices, building a place for students to have fun would be the best choice to enhance students’ life quality.
February 4, 2020 at 3:53 pmScore: 65.5
Issues:
- About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
