When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.

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In modern society, we can communicate through many mediums that tunnels contribute to the teamwork. Some loves emailing. , but for me, the most convenient one is talking in person. As talking Talking face to face makes collaboration faster and more efficient compatible with the affair.

Fundamentally, talking in person could make use of When you talk in person you can use the body language such as gestures and facial expressions. For example, when the other person is talking about something I don’t agree with, I may frown. This facial movement shows my concern and disagreement, and the other person can respond to this. . And the partner could dig this out. In following discussion, he will reconsider his statement. From this By seeing facial expressions, we can go on finding mistakes and revise our idea. By repeating such a process, we can move and make progress in a faster way.

In second point Secondly, talking in person improves creative work., and it eliminates reduces the time we spend typing and constructing written responses of typing and deep thought of sentence organization without doubt. Whatever I think, I could can speak it out at once if I am speaking in person to someone, and face-to-face talk often gives rise to some novel and instant ideas. And we will not slip it through fingers, unlike in the circumstances of keyboarding.

In contrast, there exists a However, there is a disadvantage to face-to-face communication. Sometimes we aren’t able to consider the issue from every aspect with high spirits. Since people tend to pay more attention to some intriguing parts, omitting small points. (Rewrite this part, it does not make sense)

From this angle, email can may provide a solution. Thinking often accompanies typing. During the period of While typing, we can use more time to polish our the ideas with rigorous logic. We always wish the receiver to understand our mind in a precise way with ease. As a message giver, we ought to understand the information before we send them to our partners. (Rewrite)

In conclusion, I love prefer talking in person better because of its immediacy and the freedom it brings with. But not everyone prioritizes could exert these advantages. To those who are afraid of voicing their opinions in front of others, email is better than talking in person. But if we aim for at effective results of the project, it’s it is necessary to strengthen the logic mind (?). No matter by email or in-person communication in talk, we ought to comb through our brains for useful ideas and clear words. Thus, we can process and convey them. To sum up, we need not only a communication medium but also a clear mind to make others understand us well.