Which area the government should fund to improve children’s education? 1).hiring more teachers to teach in a small class 2).preschool education before kindergarten 3).providing some training courses so that teachers can be more professional.

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  • takeshi
    University: Tsinghua University
    Nationality: Japan
    April 3, 2020 at 3:41 am

    Which area the government should fund to improve children’s education?
    1).hiring more teachers to teach in a small class
    2).preschool education before kindergarten
    3).providing some training courses so that teachers can be more professional

    In some people’s views, providing more courses is unnecessary. Contrary to these people’s views is my perspective that providing courses and professional teachers is beneficial to children’s academic learning and teachers’ personal development.

    What must be prioritized is that courses with professional teachers, instead of taught by a teacher who doesn’t get any trans, will definitely improve children’s study ability. To begin with, by communicating with professional teachers in class, children have access to being more efficient than ever before. In detail, when professional teachers are taking courses, they are capable to catch key points of the course, which is most significant to the final exam. Children will study more efficiently. On the contrary, there is no doubt that teachers with no trans will improve children’s study. Moreover, courses with professional teachers can trigger children’s interest to study deeply. To begin with, children are likely to listen to the teacher who can let others feel satisfied. To explain it further, if children are interested in courses they will spend more time on improving their study.

    What should be equally worth discussing is that teachers with better trans are beneficial to their personal development. To begin with, professional teachers usually can get a better salary. In detail, professional teachers are popular with parents and students, they are capable to earn respect from society, therefore, it will improve their salary to lead a rosy life.  Additionally, courses with professional teachers will improve the school’s reputation as well. To begin with, professional teachers can attract students’ attention to get into the school. In detail, with more and more students get into the school, it will get more funds from society and parents. And the school can buy advanced equipment for teachers and pay a high salary.

    Learning efficiently and deeply is significant to children’s academic learning. Teacher with trans also can improve their salary and reputation to lead a better life. Therefore, the government should provide funds to take more courses with professional teachers.

    April 9, 2020 at 2:12 am

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