Your school wants to improve the quality of students’ life in the dormitory. Which one of the following do you think the school should build in dorms?1. Quiet study area 2. Exercise room for students to keep physical well-being 3. Room for entertainment

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Your school wants to improve the quality of students’ life in the dormitory. Which one of the following do you think the school should build in dorms?1. Quiet study area 2. Exercise room for students to keep physical well-being 3. Room for entertainment

  • kevin
    University: WHBC
    Nationality: China
    August 15, 2020 at 1:31 pm

    People have been looking for ways to improve students’ quality of life. But the solution to the problem varies from person to person. While some think it is better to build a study area or a game center, I believe constructing an exercise room sone of the best choices.

    We have to acknowledge that the cost of construction of exercise room should be the highest among these choices. Compared to study room which just few desks and chairs are needed, exerciser room requires many other facilities like, running machine, yoga mat, sandbags… Also, while using these exercising facilities, noise may be generated. The sound of collision between metals while doing weight lifting and the sound of music while doing yoga. This may become a disturbance for students living in the building, since with those sounds, they cannot focus very well while studying or have trouble sleeping at night.

    However, the benefits it brings will be greater than that brought by building a study room or an entertainment center. One reason for that is library and some social networking sites seems like better places than the study room and entertainment center in the dorm. In the contrast, the exercise room provides students place to relax themselves. Through doing indoor sports such as running or some other anaerobic exercises, students are able to improve their body condition and let off their emotions from their studying lives at the same time.

    Activities in the exercising room is also helpful for students to enlarge their social zone. Students who spend much time at the room will know each other soon since they are all interested in doing sports. With the same interest and more common topics, it is going to be easier for this group people to become friends. Also, they are able to invite other people to attend some sports event like marathon or bike riding.

    Considered from different aspects, building an exercising room in student dormitory is the best choice. I believe students will find it useful if the plan is approved.

    August 21, 2020 at 9:50 pm

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