Jasmine Letter of Recommendation

Score: 39.1 [A score of 80 is minimum for a critical graduate school application document such as an RL. ]

Suggestions for Improvement

1. Your LOR contains plagiarised content [source: https://www.eduers.com/reference/sampleeducation/%5D
2. Correct numerous grammatical/syntactic/factual/logical inconsistencies;
3. Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts;
4. Shorten split sentences exceeding 20 words;
5. A significant number of exaggerated adverbs[A professor is expected to produce an error-free, highly relevant and strong LOR];
6. Keep balanced paragraphs (limit each to 80 words, preferably.)
7. Keep tense consistent.

Problems Highlight

Dear there,

I am very glad to write this letter of recommendation for XX for her application of the PhD program in [wrong preposition]your university. I was her supervisor when she was a graduate student in XX , Tianjin University.

As her research adviser, I directed her research and found her a promising youth radiating with intelligence, creativity and preciseness.[Verbose] She always takes every experiment seriously[Problematic adverb], including test design, operations and results analysis. Zhou Miao worked on [article error]study of XX. Though faced with exceedingly [Problematic adverb] grim situations including the lack of laboratory, apparatus as well as readily available experimental methods, she overcame tough difficulties and designed and performed experiment independently. By working hard to optimize the experimental plan independently[repetition], she cracked problems one by one, and[grammatical error] completed a fully English thesis that was characterized by[passive] academic excellence. [Verbose] Meanwhile, she learned immensely [Problematic adverb] pragmatic spectral analysis technologies, such as UV-visible absorption spectrum, Fluorescence spectrum, Fourier transform infrared spectrum (FT-IR), and different data mining tools including parallel factor analysis (PCA) from chemometric analysis, two-dimensional correlation spectrum (2D-COS), self-organization mapping (SOM), facilitating her to characterize spectral characteristics comprehensively.[Verbose]

Moreover, diligence, perseverance and independence an obvious feature with Zhou Miao. In order to grasp programming language more comprehensively[repetition], she once audited C++ classes of six teachers, from which she learned teacher’s different ways of thinking and got enormous inspirations. [Verbose] And[grammatical error] despite of[wrong preposition] poor memory, she spared more time to make up for it. Drinking a lot of coffee all the[article error] day, she insisted on going to bed at 3 PM and getting up at 6 am [inconsistency]every day, and ultimately [Problematic adverb] memorizing a political book within a week.[Verbose] Furthermore, Zhou Miao was a warm-hearted, patient and upright student. Whenever other students in my lab got confused at some points[Grammatical Error] and I could always see her help them explain patiently.

Zhou Miao has been skillfullyProblematic adverb] trained in her graduate study [Grammatical Error]and I believe she is ready to polish and challenge herself more in your university with her seriousness, perseverance and sense of innovation.[Verbose] I fully support her to join your program. If you have any questions about Zhou Miao, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Comment: The highlighted errors are only a TINY number of errors/issues in this LOR. This LOR needs to be re-written. Our FREE review/revision service concerning LOR is provided once only. Contact us should you need further review and revision.