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  • Abandon2Zenith
    University: Xi’an Jiaotong University
    Nationality: China
    October 19, 2020 at 9:27 am

    What’s more,  young people have a lot of pressure now. Societies should not treat them too strictly. However, many people do not know that and still expect young people to obey strict rules. It is harmful to young people’s mental and physical health. For example, last winter, I interned in Shanghai. Traffic in Shanghai was very congested, so I had to spend about 2 hours on the subway. Besides 8 hours working, I also had to prepare for the GRE test for 3 hours every day. You can imagine how exhausted I was. However, there was a time I was asked to give my seat to an old man on the subway, because I was younger than him. I was very tired, but I cannot sleep for a while on the seat because I was young. It was unfair!  I cried on the spot! That’s why I think societies expect young people to follow too strict rules.

    In sum, I agree with this statement for the following two reasons. First, some rules for young people are unreasonable and inflexible. Second, young people have a lot of pressure and need to be treated better.

    Abandon2Zenith
    University: Xi’an Jiaotong University
    Nationality: China
    October 17, 2020 at 2:18 am

    I apologize for forgetting to submit the revised previous essay. Now I have resubmitted the previous essay. Thank you for correcting my composition.

    Abandon2Zenith
    University: Xi’an Jiaotong University
    Nationality: China
    October 17, 2020 at 2:14 am

    Some people believe that scandals are useful, because the scandals can attract public attention on social problems in a different way from speakers and reformers. In my humble opinion, scandals that could expose unhealthy societal phenomena are valuable. Such scandals can also prompt problem-solving. By contrast, scandals that only serve to capture public attention are meaningless.

     

    Those who completely deny the value of scandals think that social change requires an appeal of a speaker or an implementation of a reformer. For example, a speech of Martin Luther King triggered a surge of demand for freedom and equality. In above example, the efforts of speakers and reformers are crucial. Without their promotion, these scandals can only get momentary attention.

     

    However, it is precisely because of scandals in these areas that have reveal social problems and attract public attention that speakers and reformers can notice them. Scandals make speakers and reformers believe that these unhealthy phenomena urgent enough to need to be solved, and take efforts to solve problems. For example, Martin Luther King’s Civil Rights Movement originated from a scandal. In this scandal, a black woman refused to give her seat to a white woman, eventually jailed. From this perspective, the scandal attracts public attention to problems, prompting speaker and reformers to solve the problems as soon as possible. Such scandals have positive significance in the progress of society. It can be said the purpose of such scandals is to eliminate similar scandals in the future.

     

    Even if social problems are not solved, such scandals will allow us to look at exposed issues from different views. For example, earthquake happened in 2011 endangered dozens of students in Japan. A speaker may comment the courage of rescue team and claim the inevitability of disaster. However, some media exposed scandals later. The scandals shows that the calamity could have been avoided, if teachers had taken right measures. What’s more, the Prism Gate infringe the privacy of citizens. It is a secret and illegal surveillance to citizens by NSA and FBI. Though it has not been prevented, Snowden still improve people’s consciousness of privacy protection.

     

    Of course, some people think that the gossip scandals of celebrities can attract our attention into in unknown side fo celebrity. This type of gossip could be very entertaining. However, such scandals have no positive effect on social progress, and have no substantial social mean, even having negative impact on children. What’s more many media spread fake news to capture momentary attention. If not controlled, they will be mislead more people.

     

    In a sum, in regard to scandals that expose unhealthy aspects of society, the scandals can attract public attention, increasing the sense of urgency ,and prompting speakers and reformers to solve problems. Such scandals are valuable. At the same time, such scandals can also allow people to view things from a new perspective. Whereas, there is no real worth in scandals that have no substantial value in solving social problems.

    Abandon2Zenith
    University: Xi’an Jiaotong University
    Nationality: China
    October 16, 2020 at 7:36 am

    To sum up, financial support is more effective in the area of sports, and sponsoring athletics is much more profitable than supporting arts. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that government should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics.