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  • Monster
    University: wuhan
    Nationality: china
    June 25, 2019 at 8:17 am

    After increasing for hundreds of years, the number of private cars leads to a debate between car owners and environment protectors. Whereas, I believe private cars are helpful in many aspects, even in coping with environmental problems.

    In the first place, the trend of private cars has resulted in extreme benefits on macro-economy. Car industry provide a great number of jobs for ordinary people. For example, thousands of part-time taxi drivers start their career after getting one new private car. Applied engineers can get a wonderful position in car company after graduate. Besides, buying a car means kinds of development on quality of life. For instance, it arises working efficiency, since it helps us spend less time on commute. Plus, it is of great joy for car owners when driving during holidays, which allow tourists to enjoy freedom and explore the nature.

    Next, which worth mentioning is that driving private cars do little harm to eco-system, compared with some other pollutions. According to some environment reports, there is no deny that factories are the biggest factor, accounting for air pollution. However, private cars contribute less than 10% to it. In contrast, several car brands plan to develop new-energy cars, which produce less waste air. For example, Tesla has made a variety of electric cars, helping drivers remove 30% usage of energy.
    To sum up, environmental issues are complex, but people are not supposed to blame all on private cars. Anyway, it is a global trend that cars producers are more responsible for society and environment.

    Monster
    University: wuhan
    Nationality: china
    June 19, 2019 at 8:47 am

    The population problem has existed for decades and seems to become more serious day after day. At present, nearly every country tends to decline the average age of people. However, some reviews think young adults cause a variety of social problems than older men. Generally, I agree with the first view.

    In the first place, young adults are more able to drive the macro-economy. Obviously, young people appear more demands for consumption than older adults. Therefore, they are quite concerned about working. In this condition, most young men work until midnight for promotion. At the same time, they spend their salary on houses, trips and entertaining, etc. Finally, young adults increase GDP from both sides. Besides, young people help save tons of money for financial department, since the youth remain less demand for social welfare. Instead, governments have to spend a lot for old men and children on education and medical care.

    Although a world full of young humans is not quite perfect, the key point is that the social problem is easy to solve. Some may propose that the increasing number of young people will aggravate employment pressure. However, reports show the number of pioneers under 30 is times of that of older adults. Therefore, it is a trend that young companies are offering hundreds of jobs today. As a result, those new companies have reconstructed many kinds of industries by hiring well-educated young people.

    To sum up, the young generation represents the future of a nation. They provide power to drive this world in all aspects, including economy, culture and society. More important is that they are willing to reform the old stubborn rules and work for better future.

    Monster
    University: wuhan
    Nationality: china
    June 8, 2019 at 9:32 am

    The population problem has been argued for several years. Nearly every country tends to decline the average age of people. Meanwhile, some reviews think young adults cause a variety of social problems than older people. Generally, I agree with the first view.

    In the first place, young adults are more able to drive the macro-economy. Obviously, young people appear more demands for consumption than older adults; thus they are quite concerned about working. In this condition, most young men work until midnight for promotion. At the same time, they spend their salary on houses, trips and entertaining, etc. Finally, it increases GDP from both sides. Besides, it helps save tons of money for financial departments, since the youth remain less need for social welfare. Instead, governments have to pay a lot for children and the old in education and medical care.

    Although a world full of young humans is not quite perfect, the key point is that the social problem is easy to solve. Some may propose that the increasing number of young people will aggravate employment pressure. However, reports show the number of innovation people under 30 is times of that of older adults. Therefore, it is a trend that young innovation companies are offering hundreds of jobs today. As a result, those new companies have reconstructed many kinds of industries by hiring well-educated young people.

    In conclusion, the young generation represents the future of a nation in all aspects. More important is that they are willing to reform the old stubborn rules and run for better achievement.

    Monster
    University: wuhan
    Nationality: china
    May 19, 2019 at 1:40 pm

    Recently, there came an argument in society about whether a person more depends on coordination or individual work by himself. Both sides have their own reasons, but I more favor the first view.

    In the first place, group working has become a basic skill in today’s globalized world. In college, teachers advocate group presentations, and in work place, leaders prefer teamwork. For example, three months ago, I worked as a marketing intern in a world-famous advertising agency. In order to make brilliant brand concept for our client, everyone engaged in brainstorms. Throughout discussions, we set and revised pitch deck again and again to defend any possible mistakes. Finally, we did a good project, which proves that the power of teamwork is endless.

    On the other hand, the reliance on each other improves the relationship among people beyond nations. In other words, teamwork helps us listen, feel and consider each other better. For example, each year, the United Nations holds lots of world summits, aiming to gather countries to solve problems as many as possible. In the process of dealing with those issues, such as global warming and population crisis. Therefore, people from different countries get chances to exchange opinions and work together to protect our earth. In fact, people have learned to be dependent since ancient times, which saved our ancestors from danger and hunger.

    In short, humans being dependent is a worldwide trend as almost everything gets more connected. To some extent, it enables each person to think and work as a family, which will benefit the society a lot.

    Monster
    University: wuhan
    Nationality: china
    May 16, 2019 at 9:43 am

    Recently, whether a person succeeds more rely on the coordination or the individual work by himself has become a debatable topic. My belief is that a closely linked world and society are quite beneficial to ourselves.

    In the first place, group working has become an essential skill in today’s highly globalized world. Three months ago, I was a marketing intern in a world-famous beauty company. In order to explore brilliant brand concept and campaigns, everyone engaged in brainstorms.  Throughout various discussions, we set and revised pitch deck again and again to defend any possible mistakes. Fortunately,  we finally did a good project, which proves that the power of a group is stronger than one person.

    On the other hand, the reliance on each other actually improves the relationship among people. In other words, more coordination makes we can listen, feel and consider each other better. For example, each year, the UN will hold lots of world summits, aiming to gather countries to solve diverse problems as many as possible. In the process of dealing with those issues, such as global warming and terrorism. Therefore, people from different nations will exchange their opinions and eventually come to an agreement.

    In short, being dependent is a worldwide trend, not only in daily work, but also in international society. I believe, a combined world will bring more hope for future.

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