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  • Lane
    University: Xi'an Shiyou University
    Nationality: Chinese
    November 23, 2021 at 4:38 pm

    What do you mean? As ETS says, Typically a TOEFL writing effective response will be 300 words at least. Before I submit this essay, I wrote 4 paragraphs and that’s nearly 350 words. According to your requirement, I have to delete a whole paragraph. Now you want to “reorganize” my essay into a 4-5 paragraphs within 320 words. What do you mean? Can we call that a TOEFL writing? That short a paragraph can’t be considered a well-developed essay by the ETS. Please, explain.

    Lane
    University: Xi'an Shiyou University
    Nationality: Chinese
    November 23, 2021 at 1:58 pm

    Lately, I’ve heard an argument on whether teachers were more appreciated and valued in the past than they are nowadays. Some believe that now we have much more access to education, so people are  more respectful to teachers. However, I think that teachers were more appreciated in the past.
    To begin with, teachers are more cherished by people in the past. We all heard about women being restricted to go to school long time ago, not only in the western world, like Europe’s art school, but also in the eastern world, like the Chinese Shuzhai. Take ancient China as an example, most students that had the chance to go to Shuzhai are boys. What’s more, they must be some lords’ or influential merchants’ kids. Therefore, teachers’ social status was surely high and much respected. They are the most important part of the Shuzhai, and the only way an ordinary family’s child could be rich or be a lord is to study in the Shuzhai and try to stand out from the Kejv test.
    Besides, nowadays teachers are easier to become. As society develops, our lives become more peaceful and rich, we have much more chances to get educated as well. In recent years, one could be another’s teacher even he or she only gets an education from junior high school, which is just so easier than in the past. Education equality is enjoyed by most, but the quality of education is getting worse. Someone can become a teacher just for his or her diploma, not their real capability and knowledge. The teaching method is well-adjusted and the textbook is modified by the country so that anyone can understand it and become a teacher. The teacher is not a respectful career anymore, in most cases.

    Lane
    University: Xi'an Shiyou University
    Nationality: Chinese
    November 21, 2021 at 1:49 am

    P4:

    Last but not the least, not like years ago, people have more options now. Back in the ancient time, not only teachers were less, but the way we can reach them is also scarce. However, in modern times, we develop so many different ways to reach to education. As the internet becomes more and more available, now everyone can reach it even on their cellphone. On the internet, not only you can find a teacher to teach you things from the classroom, but also you can always find something new that can never be found in the classroom. Teachers become unnecessary to some extent, for the widespread of the internet.