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  • TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:47 am

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Lots of non-original content (i.e. you copied the topic for the first paragraph).

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:39 am

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
    3. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:32 am

    Score: 62.1

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:30 am

    Hi, since I have worked on this essay many times, I will stop working on this essay. You can submit a new essay.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:29 am

    Hi, since I have worked on this essay many times, I will stop working on this essay. You can submit a new essay.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:22 am

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:18 am

    Score: 72.3

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    I will get back to you shortly.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:16 am

    Score: 57

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. More than 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

     

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:08 am

    Score: ungraded

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 5:01 am

    Score: 57

    Issues:

    1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 4:54 am

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 4:46 am

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 4:40 am

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 3:29 am

    Score: ungraded

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 13, 2020 at 3:18 am

    Score: 68.8

    I will come back to you shortly.

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