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    University: SVA
    Nationality: United States
    July 30, 2022 at 3:36 am

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>Secondly, it is better to distinguish there are no other factors also caused by global warming that lead to the decrease of the deer population. There can be other reasons that result in the decline of the deer population that is also related to the global warming trends. For example, the reduction in their population was probably caused by their bodies’ maladjustment to the hot weather. Since the Arctic deer used to live in the Arctic circle, their bodies are more accustomed to the severe cold weather than warmer weather, such as having thicker fur than other deer species. Therefore, their body might be malfunctioning due to the increasing global temperature. Moreover, warmer weather also provides a suitable environment for viruses and bacteria to live, which could be one reason for the declining deer groups. Hence, even though global warming trends coincide with the decline of the Arctic deer population, we still cannot conclude that the shrinking population is related to the melting sea ice. In this way, we need to know whether the deer’s body will be abnormal or not in the current temperature.</span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>Additionally, we need more evidence to support the statement that the Arctic deer group decreasing is only related to global warming trends. Since the article author used the word “coincide”, we could not draw a direct conclusion that there are no other reasons that cause the declining deer population. For instance, the increasing human activities, such as hunting, tourism development, and the increasing global pollution, could also cause the shrinking of the Arctic deer groups.  We could not exclude that other reasons are the culprit for the deaden deer population. Hence, to improve the article’s statement, the author should make sure that other factor of the habitat environment does not change except the melting ocean caused by global warming.</span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>In conclusion, though the article has a compelling argument that the declining Arctic deer population is related to the inability to travel across the island, which is caused by the global warming trend and the melting ocean water, it still needs more facts to enhance its statement.  </span>