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  • Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    August 14, 2021 at 4:23 am

    I disagree with the statement that improving Internet access deserves more money from the government than improving public transportation does. Improving Internet access make people addicted to smartphones, but improving Internet access provides people with convenience.

    Some may say that improving Internet access could help people get information more quickly. For example, when people want to know the latest news or enjoy a movie online, they may be hampered by horrible Internet access.

    However, I have to point out some disadvantages that improved Internet access may bring. For example, when Internet access becomes more accessible, people will be addicted to smartphones, so they do nothing but laugh at the interesting things on the screen. As a result, people who spend lots of time on the phone tend to refuse outdoor activities. Therefore, they endanger their health and make no new friends anymore because of indulging in the Internet.

    What deserves more attention are the benefits of improving public transportation. When public transportation is enhanced in an area, people waste less time on transportation and spend more time on work or consumption, so the local economy increases. For instance, traveling from Beijing to Shanghai was a problem a few years ago because the trip took people more than ten hours. In response, the local government built a high-speed rail between Beijing and Shanghai to reduce travel times. As a result, people can reach other cities in reasonable times, and business between the cities was intensified. Therefore, the economy improved in both two cities.

    To sum up, improving public transportation is more significant than improving Internet access. Although improving Internet access provides us with some convenience, it also stops people from keeping healthy and making friends with others. But improving public transportation boosts the economy and reduces travel times.

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    August 12, 2021 at 2:27 am

    I disagree with the statement that improving Internet access deserves more money from the government than improving public transportation does.

    Some may say that improving Internet access could help people get information more quickly. For example, when people want to know what happened these days or enjoy a movie using the Internet, they may get disturbed by the horrible Internet access. The problem is severe in some states of America. However, I have to point out that some disadvantages that the improved Internet access may bring. When people become addicted to  smartphones, they can do nothing but laugh at the interesting things they see on the screen. As a result, people who spend lots of time on the phone tend to refuse outdoor activities. Therefore, they will endanger their health due to addiction to the Internet. At the same time, they make no new friends anymore because they stay in the house and play with the fresh stuff on the Internet.

    So let us talk about the benefits that improving public transportation could give us. When public transportation is enhanced in an area, the economy of this area tends to increase as well. At the same time, people and workers can waste less time on transportation. Thus, they could spend more time on work or consumption. For instance, traveling from Beijing to Shanghai was a problem a few years ago because the transportation took people  more than ten hours. As a sequence, the local government decided to construct the High-speed train between Beijing and Shanghai in an effort to improve transportation. As a result, people can reach each other’s city in less time than before, and  business communications between the cities intensify. Therefore, the economy improved in both two cities.

    To sum up, improving public transportation is more significant. Although improving Internet access provides us with some convenience, it also stops people from keeping healthy and making friends with other people. But improving public transportation could boost the economy of the area that owns better transportation.

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    August 5, 2021 at 11:47 am

    I disagree with the statement that improving Internet access deserves more money from the government than improving public transportation does.

    Some may say that improving Internet access could help people get information more quickly. For example, when people want to know what happened these days or enjoy a movie using the Internet, they may get disturbed by the horrible Internet access. The problem is severe in some states of America. However, I have to point out that some disadvantages the improved Internet access may bring. When people are addicted to their smartphones, they could do nothing but laugh at the interesting things they saw on the screen. As a result, people who spend lots of time on the phone tend to refuse outdoor activities. Therefore, their addiction to the Internet may threaten their health. At the same time, they make no new friends anymore because they stay in the house and play with the things on the Internet.

    So let us talk about the benefits that improving public transportation could give us. When public transportation is enhanced in an area, the economy of this area tends to increase as well because the business people and workers can waste less time on transportation. Thus, they could spend more time on work or consuming. For instance, traveling from Beijing to Shanghai was a problem a few years ago because the transportation took people almost more than ten hours. So the government decided to construct the High-speed train to improve transportation. As a result, people can reach the opposite city in less time than before, and the business communications between the cities had been more frequent than before. Therefore, the economy improved in both two cities.

    To sum up, improving public transportation is more significant. Although improving Internet access provides us with some convenience, the improvement also stops people from keeping healthy and making friends with others. But improving public transportation could increase the economy of the area which owns better transportation.

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    August 1, 2021 at 1:09 pm

    Some prefer to live in one place forever, while others enjoy living in different areas. From my point of view, living in one place forever and living in different cities are equally fabulous.
    To begin with, living in one place all life is welcome by many because they favorite invariance and stability in lifestyle. After staying in one city for a long time, people can know everywhere in that city and have some special friends around. Thus, they will feel safe and comfortable with the building and the people they always see. For example, one of my friends, Calvin, has spent ten years in Changsha, an attractive city in China. He likes the continuous period of rain in the spring of Changsha because the building in the rain reminds him of the poems written by a famous poet Dufu. At the same time, he met his lover in this place during college, and this coincidence made him love the city so much.
    So you see, living in a city all life will attract a lot of people who prefer familiar things. However, this is not to say I deny the fact that living in different places is appealing. On the contrary, it is desirable to live in different locations for some of us.
    Now let’s talk about the advantages of living in different places. In my opinion, every city has its treasure that deserves to experience. Some towns are warm in winter and cool in summer, while others get beautiful sceneries and historic buildings. For example, one of my friends named Adam likes to live in Chengdu in summer because it’s refreshing to live in this city during hot summer vacation. However, he prefers to stay in Luoyang, a famous city full of historic buildings and tasty food, at other times. He enjoys the different features in various places.
    To sum up, it’s comfortable and convenient to live in one place forever, but it’s refreshing and exciting to live in different areas. Both of them are welcome by some of us, so they are equally fabulous.

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    August 1, 2021 at 12:37 pm

    From my point of view, the most significant value that should be shared with a young child is being well-organized.
    Firstly, we should admit that being helpful to others is essential because it’s a common virtue. However, the more meaningful thing we should know is how to learn from others. I have a friend called Adam who always wanted to know how scientists deal with disturbing things when he was young. As a result, he became a well-known scientist after growing up. During his formative years, he also liked to help students. I guess the knowledge and helpful quality he learned from others must keep him warm-hearted.
    Secondly, although being honest is a vital point we should keep all the time, it’s not the most frequent thing we hear from our parents because there is something more substantial. As a child, it’s natural to say something true because making up a false thing is difficult for children. Once the child talks about something untrue, the parents or teachers only need to punish the child for falsehood, which is strict enough to ensure the honesty of the child.
    Thirdly, being well-organized is the most valuable thing parents should share with their children. What we must keep in mind is that human always tends to be lazy, and no one naturally likes to arrange everything nicely. However, a tight and well-arranged timetable always helps us with heavy work. Thus, it’s valuable to teach children to organize their stuff well. When it comes to a well-organized person, what comes to our mind always is Musk, CEO of Tesla. Every minute of Musk’s day has been planned to finish something essential or trivial. I guess that’s why he could succeed in business and arrange so many things in totally one day.
    All in all, although it’s important to share with children the value of being helpful or honest, the more valuable we should share with them is being well-organized.

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    July 31, 2021 at 1:31 pm

    老师还提供文书的写作服务啊

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    July 31, 2021 at 1:30 pm

    * I’m afraid I have to disagree with the statement. 好在使用I’m afraid,条件化表达
    * 介词的使用unclear,through可以换成by doing
    * 将来时不能滥用,想要表达某事有什么效果时可以用can,而不是will产生什么结果
    * a whole day study -> a whole day of studying ( 如果day作为中心词) OR a whole-day study
    * 段落太长不好看,切割段落,并用逻辑联结词过渡
    * 从句和主句应该从逻辑上来说主语保持一致
    * 表示泛指时,名次前不使用冠词
    * 段落中句子的撰写应该与其他部分相关,即逻辑上需要顺畅,多余无关的部分应该删除
    * 没有被比较的内容的时候,不使用more
    * 表示形容词的后置介词结构,可以用前置形容词代替,这样会更便于阅读。比如wokers of high quality可以用high-quality/competent wokers代替
    * 少写废话,比如and so on
    * 避免抽象化的表达,多使用具体的表达。比如 better parents -> more informed parents
    * 重写题目会扣分

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    July 31, 2021 at 1:29 pm

    看视频笔记:

    – [ ] 首段清晰,不能写 reasons as follow,也不能写effecitve measures。原因要总结出来,具体什么measures要写出来。
    – [ ] 漂亮的英文写作,一个句子的主语呼应到前一个句子的主语/宾语,或其指代。所以尽量不要采用there be,被动语态,因为呼应不上
    – [ ] 连词的使用需要注意,并列、因果什么的要和前后句子对应上,不能硬用
    – [ ] 避免绝对化用语,多用conditional writing,比如名词前加上many之类的。如果要用绝对化写作,那么需要后面的事实验证
    – [ ] 写作应注意formal,不要使用informal的表达。比如应使用it is,而不是it’s
    – [ ] 代词的指代需要清晰,一个句子的主语they应清楚的指代之前句子的某部分
    – [ ] 对于名次来说,如果后面有了限定,前面就应该有冠词
    – [ ] 用词应注意简洁,避免重复。比如make a balance 就可以用balance代替
    – [ ] unclear的错误之处在于说的不够详细清晰,比如positivity就可以使用positive learning attitude
    – [ ] 事实与自己的观点应该区分开来

    Radetzky
    University: Central South University
    Nationality: China
    July 31, 2021 at 4:11 am

    From my point of view, the most significant value that should be shared with a young child is being well-organized.

    Firstly, we should admit that being helpful to others is essential because it’s a common virtue. However, the more meaningful thing we should know is how to learn from others. For example, I have a friend called Adam who always wanted to know how scientists deal with disturbing things when he was young. As a result, he became a well-known scientist after growing up. During his formative years, he also liked to help students. I guess the knowledge and principle he learned from others must keep him warm-hearted.

    Secondly, although being honest is a vital point we should keep all the time, it’s not the most frequent thing we hear from our parents because there is something more substantial. As a child, it’s natural to say something true because making up a false thing is difficult for children. Once the child talks about something untrue, the parents or teachers give a warning, which is strict enough to ensure the honesty of the child.

    Thirdly, being well-organized is the most valuable thing parents should share with their children. What we must keep in mind is that human always tends to be lazy, and no one naturally likes to arrange everything nicely. However, a tight and well-arranged timetable always helps us with heavy work. Thus, it’s valuable to teach children to organize their stuff well. When it comes to a well-organized person, what comes to our mind always be Musk,  CEO of Tesla. Every minute of his day has been planned to finish something essential or trivial. I guess that’s why he could succeed in business and arrange so many things in totally one day.

    All in all, although it’s important to share with children the value of being helpful or honest, the more valuable we should share with them is being well-organized.