The revised one:

There is an argument about the importance of History and Science and Technology. Some people believe that History should be a compulsory course in school curriculum. Others think that Science and Technology are more crucial. In my opinion, while it is necessary to study History, practical courses such as Science and Technology should be given more priority.

On the one hand, History is a kind of subject which introduces us life in the past and give us identities. Young students can learn their ancestors’ lives and sufferings through history learning. Thus they get to know how their countries and cultures have evolved over centuries. For example, students in China study history dates back to 1000 BC. They would feel proud and a sense of belonging about the ancient Chinese civilisation. Therefore, I believe that History is an indispensable part in our self-identity. What’s more, the heritage left by our predecessors, such as paintings and architecture, is invaluable. Through them we can understand different cultures and learn the real beauty created by human.

On the other hand, although History is important, Science and Technology is actually the foremost one. That’ because we live in an era where modern technology is an integrality of our daily life. We use computers in our work and study to process complex data, we shop online and order delivery food through smart devices at home. It is hard to imagine how a person could live if he or she don’t understand digital technology. So it is vital to include Science and Technology in primary school courses. Furthermore, computer science is penetrating in almost all industries nowadays. Students equipped with these profound knowledge are more likely to find a good job and be successful in their career. This is the very purpose of modern education.

In conclusion, History is, admittedly, a vital course in school education. But Science and Technology are much more crucial. Both schools and governments should devote more resources and time to Science and Technology. And students should be educated with the most critical knowledge during different time in their life.