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  • shimingyuan
    University: Beihang University
    Nationality: China
    May 25, 2020 at 9:17 am

    Should Children be Prohibited from Playing Computer Games?

    Whether children should play computer games or not has always been a hot issue. Many people believe that computer games waste children’s time, harm their eyes and even erode their personality. As such, most parents forbid their children from playing such games. In my opinion, people often maintain a bias against computer games and neglect their advantages. It’s beneficial for children when they play computer games appropriately.

    First of all, playing games in a limited time can help children to release their pressure. Nowadays, children are quite stressful since they are always engaged in their daily tasks. As a result, they have to reduce their stress. Thanks to computer games, they provide various kinds of amusements for children to relax. For example, shooting games are quite prevalent in the world since they always bring excitement to players. These games can bring pleasure to children and help them to alleviate pressure.

    Secondly, computer games can improve children’s skills. For instance, there are plenty of prevalent games encouraging children to build castles or houses. Such games can inspire children’s creativity. What’s more, there are numerous games emphasizing teamwork and let the team overcome various kinds of difficulties. These games can improve children’s leadership and deepen the friendship between the teammates.

    Although computer games can help children to relax and improve some of their abilities, there are still plenty of nonnegligible effects which induce children’s physical and mental problems. For instance, computer games can damage children’s eyesight and distract them from study or even lead them to violence and crime. Parents need to help their children to avoid these side effects by supervising them carefully. Under their guidance, children can prevent the harmful impacts of computer games.

    Therefore, we can conclude that children can benefit from computer games through many aspects. They should be allowed to play computer games occasionally. But meanwhile, parents have to supervise their children carefully, and children also need to improve their self-direction. Under these circumstances, children can prevent the detrimental influences of computer games.

    shimingyuan
    University: Beihang University
    Nationality: China
    May 22, 2020 at 12:45 pm

    should children be prohibited from playing computer games?

    Nowadays, many parents consider that playing computer games have detrimental effects on their children and do not allow their children to play them. In my opinion, though having some harmful impacts on children, computer games should not be banned for children. If children can control the time they spend on computer games, they will avoid addiction and benefit from the games.

    First of all, playing games in a limited time can help children to release their pressure. Nowadays, children are quite stressful since they are always engaged in their daily tasks. As a result, they have to reduce their stress. Thanks to computer games, they provide various kinds of amusements for children to relax. For example, shooting games are quite prevalent in the world since they always bring excitement to players. When children are playing these games, the pleasure the children gain from the games will probably help them to alleviate pressure and relax themselves.

    Secondly, computer games can improve children’s skills. For instance, there are plenty of prevalent games encouraging children to build castles or houses in the games, which inspire children’s creativity. What’s more, there are numerous games emphasizing teamwork and let the team overcome various kinds of difficulties. These games can improve children’s leadership and deepen the friendship between the teammates.

    Although computer games can help children to relax and improve some of their abilities, there are still plenty of nonnegligible effects which can induce children’s physical and mental problems. For instance, computer games can damage children’s eyesight and distract them from study or even lead them to violence and crime. To prevent these side effects, parents also need to supervise their children when they are playing computer games. Under parents’ guidance, children can avoid the harmful impacts of computer games.

    Therefore, we can draw the conclusion that children can benefit from computer games when they utilize them in an appropriate way, and they should be allowed to play computer games occasionally. But meanwhile, parents have to carefully supervise their children, and children also need to improve their self-direction. Under these circumstances, children are able to prevent the detrimental influences of computer games.

    shimingyuan
    University: Beihang University
    Nationality: China
    May 20, 2020 at 1:46 am

    Should Children be Prohibited from Playing Computer Games?

    Nowadays, many parents consider that playing computer games have detrimental effects on their children and do not allow their children to play them. In my opinion, though having some harmful impacts on children, computer games should not be banned for children. Children can avoid to get addicted to the games and even benefit from the games by playing them in a proper way.

    First of all, playing games in a limited time can help children to release their pressure. Nowadays, children are quite stressful since they are always engaged in their daily tasks. As a result, they have to reduce their stress. Thanks to computer games, they provide various kinds of amusements for children to relax. Parents can allow their children to play computer games in a limited time. This will probably help their children to alleviate pressure and prevent them from getting addicted to the computer games.

    Secondly, computer games can improve children’s skills. For instance, there are plenty of prevalent games encouraging children to build castles or houses in the games, which inspire children’s creativity. What’s more, there are also a number of games emphasizing teamwork and let the team overcome various kinds of difficulties. These games can improve children’s leadership and deepen the friendship between the teammates.

    Although computer games can help children to relax and improve some of their abilities, there are still plenty of detrimental effects which can’t be neglected. For instance, computer games can damage children’s eyesight and distract them from study or even lead them to violence and crime. It is more essential for parents to supervise their children when they are playing computer games. Under their parents’ guidance, children can avoid the harmful impacts of computer games.

    Therefore, I am of the opinion that children can benefit from computer games when they play them in a suitable way and they should be allowed to play computer games occasionally. But meanwhile, parents have to carefully supervise their children and children also need to improve their self-direction. Under these circumstances, children are able to prevent the detrimental influences of computer games.

     

    shimingyuan
    University: Beihang University
    Nationality: China
    May 1, 2020 at 10:21 am

    First of all, only when students learn ideas and concepts can they be able to understand the facts. Facts may only tell you that they actually happened, while ideas and concepts can provide the reasons behind the facts. For example, a math textbook contains thousands of formulas, which are impossible for students to remember. However, with profound comprehension of the concepts, most students are able to utilize them and deduct these formulas by themselves. As a consequence, students can save plenty of time remembering the details of the formulas.

    Second, as the societies are improving to a higher level, those who have unique ideas are more likely to stand out from the crowd. Since the technologies are enhancing, the database of the Internet can hold large number of information for us and we don’t need to remember so many facts. Actually, our society needs people who have new ideas and creativities, cause they have the potential to affect human’s life. For instance, Steve Jobs, who proposed the concept of the smartphone, had won a great success in commerce and improved people’s life qualities through various aspects. So learning ideas and concepts are of greater significance for students. The abilities to originate new ideas may bring them a brighter future.

    shimingyuan
    University: Beihang University
    Nationality: China
    April 19, 2020 at 2:18 pm

    This is the article I have revised:

    First of all, learning facts is an easy job as the technologies are developing. There are a lot of opportunities for us to do that. We can surf the Internet to get as much information as we want by flicking through the websites. Various kinds of books can also provide a large amount of facts for us. In simple terms, people can learn facts efficiently through affluent sources even though they haven’t heard about these facts before. Since we can lightly get facts through numerous aspects nowadays, we don’t need to spend so much time learning facts. It is valuable to focus on more important things than the facts, that is, understanding ideas and concepts.

    Second, by learning ideas and concepts, we are more likely to get inspirations and make innovations. Take studying physics as an example. We can learn about three laws of Newton from any books of the fundamental physics. By understanding these concepts, we may learn how Newton raised these ideas and how did he prove them. Also, we may discover some weak points of Newton’s experiments. Then, we will probably have ideas to design new experients which are better. During this procedure, we get inspirations from the scientists, and we originate new ideas. That is what deep learning brings to us. It is much better than only knowing the formulas or the laws.