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  • wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    September 18, 2019 at 2:49 am

    个人陈述分为两种,personal statement 和statement of purpose,每种都要和所申请项目呼应。大多数中介机构都没有这样的认知水平和写作水平,我见过的大型中介,其文书在语法层面就漏洞百出,与其高昂的服务费用一点也不匹配。

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    September 18, 2019 at 2:30 am

    看了这个写作指导视频后,终于知道如何写英语教育专业的statement of purpose了,以前总是不会写个人陈述,总是写成personal statement!

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    September 11, 2019 at 8:51 am

    There has always been much interest in the question of whether we should join in a travel group led by a tour guide. I have a few competent friends who are loyal fans of the lonely adventure. They often climb mountains alone, or ride their bicycles for several days without companions. Loneliness never become their problem, and their lack of local knowledge can also get solved by adequate preparation and search engines. They may be right to think that travel alone is the top option. However, from my perspective, the best way to travel is in a team led by a tour guide.

    The decisive factor is that my personal ability in many cases cannot substitute the role of a guider or teammate. Also, most of us do not possess that kind of incentive to face the unknown adventures alone. An official report shows that most of the accidents occurring during trips happened to single tourists and inexperienced teams. When troubles come, teammates can help us out of the crisis, and a good guider can protect us from potential danger.

    People may argue that what if their purpose of travel is to relax and to obtain some exotic experience. It seems that a proper holiday and google are all they need. Nonetheless, if they expect to get sunburn and some fresh air, a tour guide also suits them well. A guider has the expertise in local restaurants, transportation, and accommodation. For example, my friend Mary plans to visit France this summer. The local tour guide can give her appropriate advice about the subway ticket, the local specialties, and the safest district to accommodate. Her teammates can share her expenses and make some brilliant adjustments to her tour plan.

    Joining in a team and having a tour guide can benefit us under many different conditions. Therefore, I agree with the statement that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    September 4, 2019 at 2:26 pm

    TOEFL Writing Topic: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.

    Version III

    We all have known that a man will never be too late to learn. But there are some disagreements when it comes to the exact content that people, especially students, should learn. Some people believe that understanding ideas and concepts is more important than learning from facts, and others hold the opposite view. From my perspective, learning facts is an essential process of understanding abstract concepts and great ideas.

    As students, we study the concepts and ideas from our textbooks, but it only completes half part of the learning process. Learning how to apply those ideas into real situations is the very other half. When we leave school, at that time, we can only learn facts from practice, or more often, our mistakes. It will be a lot more cost, because even a little error can be severe sometimes. We would realize by then that we should have done more practice when we were students.

    In some specific circumstances, students failed to understand the concepts without learning the facts. For instance, English grammar principles learning plays a quite fundamental role in English writing skill-building. For fully understanding, students will study a couple of example sentences under teacher’s guidance. Then they need to make own sentences after class in order to handle them precisely. By correcting their errors and polishing their essays, students can eventually develop their writing skill and become successful English learners.

    Some concepts exist for application which means that without facts, they may have no reason to exist. Law students study legal concepts or terms aiming to figure out the disputes in society. In this case, they need to put them into real situations and practice daily in their later career. After that they can be sure of understanding and even mastering the legal concepts and system.

    Based on the evidence stated above, it is more important for students to learn facts than to understand the concepts and ideas.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    September 4, 2019 at 5:20 am

    TOEFL Essay TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

     

    Version III

     

    We all agree that our parents were the first teachers we had. They taught us to walk and talk when we were infants. Parents, without doubt, are true of the most indispensable teachers in one’s life, but are they the best teachers? I mean, everyone in his/her lifetime will encounter dozens of teachers. Some of them are fantastic, yet some fail to fulfill their duties properly. There is no reason that one’s first teachers are absolutely the best teachers. Some parents are not even good people, so how can they be the best teachers?

     

    A couple needs no training or examinations to become parents, so we cannot guarantee their qualification as parents, and thus leave open the possibility that those underqualified parents could possibly become their children’s best teachers. I heard that in some remote place a father taught his 2-year-old son to smoke, and a pair of parents told their primary school child to fight and hurt his classmates. For this kind of people, parenting is the last thing in the world they deserve. Unfairly, however, any couple can become parents by giving birth to a baby.

     

    Some parents meet the preconditions to be good parents, and some are even excellent professional teachers though raising a child can still be a tough challenge. This is because parents who pursue a self-fulfilling life or a successful career, despite their individual excellence, often cannot take good care of their children. Parenting is a quite demanding task. Nearly all of the parents have their regrets for failing to better fulfill their parental responsibility.

     

    Only painstaking and self-sacrificing parents have an opportunity to be the best teachers. They must have a strong spirit, positive attitude, and willingness to sacrifice their life after work and even their career to accompany their kids. Their fair personalities set good examples for their children. Therefore, these parents, beyond doubt, are the best teachers for their children.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    September 3, 2019 at 2:51 pm

    TOEFL Essay TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    Version II

    We all agree that parents are the first teachers we have got. They taught us to walk and talk when we were infants. Parents, without doubt, are one of the most indispensable teachers in one’s life, but are they the best teachers? I mean, everyone in his life will encounter dozens of teachers. Some of them are fantastic, yet some fail to fulfill their duties properly. There is no reason that one’s first teachers are the best teachers one can get. Some parents are not even good people, so how can they be the best teachers?

    A couple need no training or examines to be parents, so we cannot guarantee their qualification as parents, and thus leave alone the possibility for those underqualified parents to be their children’s best teachers. I heard that in some remote place a father taught his 2-year-old young boy to smoke, and a pair of parents told their primary school child to fight and hurt his classmates. For this kind of people, parenting is the last thing in the world they deserve. Unfairly, however, any couple can be parents by giving birth to a baby.

    Some parents meet the preconditions to be good parents and some are even excellent professional teachers, though, raising a child can still be a tough challenge. This is because parents who pursue a self-fulfilling life or successful career, despite their individual excellence, often cannot take good care of their children. Parenting is a quite demanding job. Nearly all of the parents have their regrets for failing to better fulfill their parenting job.

    Only painstaking and self-sacrificing parents have an opportunity to be the best teachers; they must have a strong spirit, positive attitude, and willingness to sacrifice their life after work and even their career to company their kids; their fair personalities set good examples for their children. Therefore, these parents, beyond doubt, are the best teachers to their children.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    August 27, 2019 at 9:00 am

    TOEFL Writing Topic: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.

    version II:

    We all have known that a man will never be too late to learn and learning is a life-long matter. But there are some disagreements when it comes to the exact content that people, especially students, should learn. Some people believe that understanding ideas and concepts is more important than learning facts, and some others hold the opposite view. From my own perspective, learning facts is an essential process of understanding abstract concepts and great ideas. I mean, without learning facts, students can never fully understand how the concepts and ideas work.

    In school, we learn many concepts and ideas from masterpieces of famous scientists and artists, but it only completes half part of the learning process. Knowing the application cases of those concepts in real situations is the other half. Students’ fully comprehensive learning leads to appropriate application of their knowledge in the society. When we come upon the stage, at that time nobody will teach us concepts any more. We can only learn facts from our practice, or more often our mistakes. It will be a lot more cost because mistakes can be severe sometimes. We will realize by then that we should have done more practice when we are students.

    In some specific circumstances, people failed to understand the concepts without learning the facts. For instance, learning English grammar principles in class plays a quite fundamental role in English writing skill building. For fully understanding, students will study a couple of example sentences under tearcher’s guidence. Then if they want to make sure of precise handling, they need to make their own sentences after class. By correcting their errors and polishing their essays day after day, those students can eventually develop their writing skill and become successful English learners.

    Some ideas and concepts exist for application. without facts, those concepts have no reason to exist. As an example, law students study legal concepts or terms aiming to figure out the disputes in our society. In this case, just remembering the words cannot fullfill the purpose. Instead, they need to put them into real cases and practice properly in their later career. After practicing a few times, until then they can be sure of understanding and even mastering the legal concepts and system.

    Learning is a life-long matter indeed, and it is more important for students to learn facts than to merely understand concepts and ideas. Only by doing so can we understand how the ideas and concepts work.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    August 20, 2019 at 8:44 am

    It is well accepted that parents are the first teachers we have got. We spend most of our time with our parents when we are children. They babysit us and teach us how to walk and talk. So there is no doubt that parents are one of the most important teachers in our life. But are they the best teachers? Everyone in his/her life will encounter dozens of teachers. Some of them are good teachers, and some are not that good. It is no reason that one’s first teachers are the best teachers one can get. Some parents are even not good parents, so why can they become the best teachers?

     

    A couple do not need any training or examines to become parents, so we cannot make sure that they are qualified enough to have this parenting job. Some parents are not even good people, so if they are underqualified to be parents, leave alone the possibility to be their children’s good teachers. I do hear about in some remote village a father teaches his 2-year-old young boy to smoke, and another pair of parents tell their primary school child to fight and hurt his classmates. For those kinds of people, parenting is the last thing in the world they deserve. Unfairly, however, any couples can become parents simply by giving birth to a baby.

     

    Even though some parents meet the preconditions to be good parents and some of them even are excellent professional teachers, raising a child can still be a tough challenge for them. They are normal people after all, which means they have their own personal life and career. It is almost unlikely for them to always take good care of their child. Parents who pursue a self-fulfilling life and successful career usually cannot do their best to raise their own children despite their individual excellence. Moreover, since life is full of uncertainty, parents’ divorce can be another factor to deprive a child of family happiness. Parenting always is a tough job, and the reality has taught us that no one can manage it without any regrets.

     

    Only those painstaking and self-sacrificing parents have the opportunity to become wonderful parents and even best teachers. They have strong spirit, positive attitude, and willingness to sacrifice their life after work or even their whole career. In this way, they can put all of their time and energy to company their children. At the same time, their individual excellence set a good example for their children. These parents therefore can become the best teachers to their children.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    August 10, 2019 at 3:21 pm

    Insightful, methodic and detailed suggestions these are.

    wish someday I could write like this.