Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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March 31, 2020 at 2:51 am
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whether we should give children chances to make their own decisions has been under heated discussion. Some people insist that children who make choices on daily matter would beome selfish. Others argue that it is vital for children to make decisions that matter to them. Generally, I believe that parents should be active in guding students while children take the initiative to make decisions.
Selecting over a wide range of clothes and foods could be time-consuming and troublesome for young children, because they haven’t developed their own preferences or because they are confused about which one is appropriate. Children could spare less attention to their surroudings such as their parents’ feeling. As a result, children may get used to caring more about thier daily stuff.
It is easy to notice that some teenagers commited a crime at a young age. It is imaginable that their parents failed to lead them to the right track. In order to make money quickly and to provide for their families, these teenagers decided to break into others’ houses. But in fact, these choices did no benefits to their families but brought a stain to their lives.
I believe that a good leader matters to children as children tend to make a decision on impulse. However, parents usually react more appropriately upon making a decision by drawing past experience. They could help correct children’s mistakes. So parents should act as mentors while allowing students to make decisions.
To conclude, necessary guidances of parents count for children to get on the right trak.
March 31, 2020 at 5:02 pmScore: 68.5
Issues:
- About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
April 1, 2020 at 2:07 amPeople are discussing whether childern should make their own decisions.. Some people insist that making choices on daily matters would lead to a crow of selfic children. Others argue that it is vital for children to make decisions that matter to them. I believe that parents should be active in guding students while children take the initiative to make decisions.
Parents expect to help children form thier own judgement on daily issues. But selecting over a wide range of clothes and foods could be time-consuming and troublesome for young children. Children could spare less attention to their surroundings, such as their parents’ feelings. As a result, children may get used to caring more about their daily stuff. They become selfish.
It is easy to notice that some teenagers commited a crime at a young age. It is imaginable that their parents failed to lead them to the right track. These teenagers may quit school. They decided to break into others’ houses to provide for their families. But in fact, these choices did no benefits to their families but brought a stain to their lives.
A good leader matters to children as they tend to make up their mind on impulse. However, parents can make more appropriate decisions by drawing experiences. They could help correct children’s mistakes. So parents should act as mentors while allowing students to make decisions.
To conclude, necessary guidances of parents count for children to get on the right track.
April 1, 2020 at 2:21 amScore: ungraded
Issues:
- Lots of spelling errors.
- About 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
April 1, 2020 at 2:37 amPeople are discussing whether children should make their decisions.. Some people insist that making choices on daily matters would lead to a crow of selfish children. Others argue that it is vital for children to make decisions that matter to them. I believe that parents should be active in guiding students while children take the initiative to make decisions.
Parents expect to help children form their judgment on daily issues. But selecting over a wide range of clothes and foods could be time-consuming and troublesome for young children. Children could spare less attention to their surroundings, such as their parents’ feelings. As a result, children may get used to caring more about their daily stuff. They become selfish.
It is easy to notice that some teenagers committed a crime at a young age. It is imaginable that their parents failed to lead them to the right track. These teenagers may quit school. They decided to break into others’ houses to provide for their families. But in fact, these choices did no benefits to their families but brought a stain to their lives.
A good leader matters to children as they tend to make up their minds on impulse. Parents can make more appropriate decisions by drawing experiences. They could help correct children’s mistakes. So parents should act as mentors while allowing students to make decisions.
To conclude, necessary guidances of parents count for children to get on the right track.
