Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Topics Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  • B CC
    University: BH
    Nationality: China
    March 20, 2020 at 2:03 pm

    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    Every day the “lie to me” shows are unfolding. People repeat the lies for money, jobs, friendship, and even love. Some believe it is no harm to tell several lies, while others consider truth is always indispensable. As far as I am concerned, truth is the justice.

    To begin with, it is a maxim, “you need to tell a bigger lie to dissemble the former one”. As for a swelling balloon, there is no doubt it will burst out until some point. News once reported how a person had been becoming a notorious swindler little by little. At first he had lied just because of showing off rich. However, the vainglory made him lie again and again, burrow money to pretend, rob Peter to pay Paul, and even scam money. Finally, the balloon broke, and he was put into the jail, regretting in his rest life. From him, we view a miniscule lie growing into a huge tragedy. Therefore, the best preclusion is to tell the truth at the start.

    Indeed, with mercifulness and sympathy, sometimes people would rather lie to solace friends or families. However, whether people benefit from the lies is doubtable. It is honesty that is the biggest loyalty. When they lie to people for those purposes, their doings is just to help others escape from reality. For example, if a father lie to his kid, “there is no bad guy in the world”, could he guarantee the kid would not be hurt forever? To secure real maturity, people need to confront with reality, no matter how horrible it is. As a result, everyone ought to tell the truth, which could promote all persons’ growth. Though worries about depression with the truth do exist, humans always absorb hope and strength from the suffering.

    In conclusion, lies lead to nothing but the worse. Since our lives are built on objective facts, honesty is the most cherishable virtue.

    March 24, 2020 at 1:54 am

    Score: 77.7

    Issues:

    1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    B CC
    University: BH
    Nationality: China
    March 24, 2020 at 10:04 am

    Every day the “lie to me” shows are unfolding. People repeat the lies for money, jobs, friendship, and even love. Some believe it is no harm to tell several lies, while others consider truth is always indispensable. In my belief, real fact is justice.

    To begin with, it is a maxim, “you need to tell a bigger lie to dissemble the former one.” As for a swelling balloon, there is no doubt it will burst out after some point. News once reported how a person had been becoming a notorious swindler little by little. At first, he had lied merely because of showing off rich. However, the vainglory instigated him to lie again and again, burrow money to pretend, rob Peter to pay Paul, and even scam money. Finally, the balloon broke, and he sent himself to prison, regretting in his rest life. From him, we view a minuscule lie growing into a huge tragedy. Thus, the best preclusion is, to tell the truth at the start.

    Indeed, with mercifulness and sympathy, sometimes people would rather lie to solace friends or families. Nevertheless, whether people take advantage of the lies is doubtable. It is honesty that is the strongest loyalty. When they lie to people for those purposes, their doings are only to help others escape from reality. For example, if a father lied to his kid, “there is no bad guy in the world,” could he guarantee the kid would not be harmed forever? To secure real maturity, people need to confront the reality, no matter how horrible it is. As a result, everyone ought to tell the truth, which could promote all persons’ growth. Though worries about depression with the honest words do exist, humans always absorb hope and strength from the sufferings.

    In conclusion, lies lead to nothing but the worse. Since our lives have established on objective reality, honesty is the most cherishable virtue.

    • This reply was modified 6 days, 15 hours ago by Lin QiuLin Qiu.
    March 24, 2020 at 3:20 pm

    Score: 74.3

    Every day the “lie to me” shows are unfolding. People repeat the lies for money, jobs, friendship, and even love. Some believe it [ wrong pronoun ] is no harm to tell several lies(, while others )[ clumsy ]consider truth is always indispensable. In my belief[ wrong word ], real fact is justice.

    To begin with, it is a maxim, “you need to tell a bigger lie to dissemble[ spelling error ] the former one.” As for a swelling balloon, there is no doubt it will burst out after some point[ incorrect word ]. News once reported how a person had been becoming[clumsy  ] a notorious swindler little by little[ misplaced ]. At first, he had lied merely because of showing off [pronoun error  ]rich. However, the vainglory instigated him to lie again and again, burrow money to pretend, rob Peter to pay Paul, and even scam money. Finally, the balloon broke, and he sent himself to prison, regretting in his rest life. From him, we view a minuscule lie growing into a huge tragedy. Thus, the best preclusion is, to tell the truth at the start.

    Indeed, with mercifulness and sympathy, sometimes people would rather lie to solace friends or families. Nevertheless, whether people take advantage of the lies is doubtable. It is honesty that is the strongest loyalty. When they lie to people for those purposes, their doings are only to help others escape from reality. For example, if a father lied to his kid, “there is no bad guy in the world,” could he guarantee the kid would not be harmed forever? To secure real maturity, people need to confront the reality, no matter how horrible it is. As a result, everyone ought to tell the truth, which could promote all persons’ growth. Though worries about depression with the honest words do exist, humans always absorb hope and strength from the sufferings.

    In conclusion, lies lead to nothing but the worse. Since our lives have established on objective reality, honesty is the most cherishable virtue.

    • This reply was modified 6 days, 15 hours ago by Lin QiuLin Qiu.
    • This reply was modified 6 days, 15 hours ago by Lin QiuLin Qiu.
    • This reply was modified 6 days, 15 hours ago by Lin QiuLin Qiu.
    March 24, 2020 at 3:43 pm

    Final revision

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