Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  • ccy
    University: High School
    Nationality: Chinese
    August 20, 2020 at 10:42 pm

    Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    I disagree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important thing we consider in any relationship. Many people believe we must be honest with our intimate people. However, there are many other things we have to think about, such as speaking tones and harmony, in a relationship. Although we learned to be honest, since we were young, telling the truth is just one of the important considerations in any relationship. In my perspective, many things are as important as telling the truth. Here are some examples.

    First of all, when we have just established a relationship with a new friend, we should take care of our words and avoid offending them. It is impolite to ask a girl the age when you are normal friends. If you ask a lady you just meet her age, she may feel offended and stop talking to you. As a result, watching the tone is an important consideration in a relationship. Telling the truth and watching the tone are different considerations we have to think about in a relationship, and they are incommensurable.

    What’s more, telling the truth sometimes hurt others feeling. If a girl asks her boyfriend about her new dress, the boy shouldn’t say the dress is ugly. This upsets the girl and they may break up if the boy always tries to tell the truth. The truth can be harmful. Lying is more important than telling the truth in some specific situations. As a result, we should consider when we can tell the truth and when we had better lie.

    Some people insist that telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship because if we tell lies, our intimate friends or parents will finally know the truth and get hurt. Indeed, lying can hurt people, but it just means telling the truth is important. How can we say telling the truth is the most important?

    August 21, 2020 at 12:27 am

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    ccy
    University: High School
    Nationality: Chinese
    August 21, 2020 at 7:33 am

    I disagree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important thing we consider in any relationship. Many people believe we must be honest with our intimate people. However, there are many other things we have to think about, such as speaking tones and harmony, in a relationship. Although we learned to be honest, since we were young, telling the truth is just one of the important considerations in any relationship. In my perspective, many things are as important as telling the truth. Here are some examples.

    First of all, when we have just established a relationship with a new friend, we should take care of our words and avoid offending them. It is impolite to ask a girl the age if you are buddy friends. If you ask a lady you seldom meet her age, she may feel offended and stop talking to you. As a result, paying attention to your words is also a crucial consideration in a relationship. Telling the truth and paying attention to your words are different considerations in a relationship, and they are incommensurable.

    What’s more, telling the truth sometimes hurt others feeling. If a man thinks his girlfriend’s dress is ugly, he should lie to his girlfriend that her dress is nice. The truth will upset the girl, and they may break up if the boy always tries to tell the truth. The truth can be harmful. Lying is more important than telling the truth in some specific situations. As a result, we should consider when we can be honest and when we have better to lie.

    Some people insist that telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship because if we tell lies, our intimate friends or parents will finally know the truth and get hurt. Indeed, lying can hurt people, but it just means telling the truth is vital. How can we say telling the truth is the most important?

     

    August 21, 2020 at 12:54 pm

    I disagree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important thing we consider in any relationship. Many people believe [say/argue that  ] we must be honest with our intimate people. However, there are many other things we have to think about [many other things  ] , such as speaking tones and harmony, in [establishing  ] a [ an enduring ] relationship. Although we learned to be honest, since we were young, telling the truth is just one of the important considerations in any relationship. In my perspective, many things are as important as telling the truth. Here are some examples.

    First of all, when we have just established a relationship with [ had ] a new friend, we should take care of our words and [ to ] avoid offending them [ him or her ] . It is impolite to ask a girl the age if you [ shift of person / we ] are buddy friends. (If you ask a lady you seldom meet her age, she may feel offended and stop talking to you) [ redundant/unclear ] . As a result, paying attention to your [ shift of person ] words is also a crucial consideration in a relationship [ repetition ] . Telling the truth and paying attention to your [shift of person  ] words are different considerations in a relationship, and they are incommensurable. [  repetition]

    What’s more, telling the truth sometimes hurt [use conditional writing  ] others [word form error  ] feeling. If a man thinks his girlfriend’s dress is ugly, he should lie to his girlfriend that her dress is nice. The truth will upset the girl, and they may break up if the boy always tries to tell the truth [ grammatical error/subjunctive ] . The truth can be harmful [ redundant ] . Lying is more important than telling the truth in some specific situations [unsubstantiated argument  ] . As a result, we should consider when we can be honest and when we have better to lie [unclear  ] .

    Some people insist that telling the truth is [grammatical error  ] the most important consideration in a relationship [  repetition] because if we tell lies, our intimate [  repetition] friends or parents will finally know the truth and get hurt. Indeed, lying can hurt people, but it [unclear pronoun  ] just means telling the truth is vital. How can we say telling the truth is the most important?

     

     

    ccy
    University: High School
    Nationality: Chinese
    September 27, 2020 at 5:33 pm

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>I disagree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important thing we consider in any relationship. Many people argue that we must be honest with our intimate people. However, we have to think about many other things such as speaking tones and harmony in establishing an enduring relationship. Although we learned to be honest since we were young, telling the truth is just one of the important considerations in any relationship.</span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>First, when we have just had a new friend, we should take care of our words to avoid offending him or her. For example, it is impolite for us to ask a girl her age. She may feel offended and refuses to be our friends. As a result, it is very important to consider our language in a relationship. </span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>What’s more, telling the truth can hurt other’s feelings. Take a mother and her son as an example. When the son draws a picture and shows it to his mother. In his mother’s eyes, her son’s painting is not aesthetic. However, she will say that he did great work. The son will be inspired by the praises and more willing to show his work to his mother. Their relationship gets closer. On contrary, if the mother tells the boy the truth that his painting is ugly, the boy will feel upset and never show his work to his mother. So, lying is also important in considering the relationship between people.</span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>Being honets, taking care of our words and lying are both important to a relationship. It is hard to say which one of these is the most important thing in a relationship, since they are all indispensable. This is the reason why I disagree with the statement.</span>

     

    October 1, 2020 at 4:03 pm

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