At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  • Esperanza
    University: Peking University
    Nationality: China
    October 13, 2020 at 12:03 pm

    At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    <div class=”answer-word js-answer-word”>I agree that universities and colleges should provide equal financial support to sports and social activities. To make the financial plan, universities and colleges should consider their goal of education at first. Since they aim to provide education that can help with students’ comprehensive development, including physical health and social ability, they should consider spending money on those two aspects.</div>
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    To improve students’ physical health, universities and colleges should support students to take part in sport. In other words, they should spend money on sports equipment and professional teachers, which cost a lot compared to libraries and classes. For example, there are nearly 10 thousand students at our university, the university spends large amounts of money, which is similar to the cost of rebuilding the library, to build two gyms, one swimming pool, and two professional exercise houses. Meanwhile, the university hires a group of professional teachers to help with students’ daily exercise. As the result, the students in our university are willing to take exercise and graduate with good health conditions.</div>
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    To enhance students’ social ability, universities and colleges should provide chances for students to participate in social activities, which is another large cost. At my university, students can choose various activities, such as voluntary work in rural areas, exchange in foreign countries, the academic presentation at international conferences. and so on. Benefit from these activities, the graduates from our university are highly valued by society for their good ability in the organization, management, and oral expression.</div>
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    <div>In all, since health and social ability are as important as academic ability, universities and colleges should spend equal money on sports and social activities compared to libraries and colleges.</div>

    October 13, 2020 at 3:54 pm

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