Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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  • sunshine
    University: zhejiang university of technology
    Nationality: China
    December 16, 2022 at 3:37 am

    Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

    It is clear that the same products are now available nearly all over the world. People seem to share an increasingly similar life with these products. For me, it is of great benefit, but also brings some detrimental impacts.

    The same products are so prevalent worldwide because of certain reasons. First, they are normally of good quality and affordable prices. The manufacturers of these goods are equipped with the cutting-edge technology and professional knowledge, which ensures their products’ quality and affordability. They also challenge the dominance of the local producers, thereby lowering prices and benefiting local customers. Besides, the practice of using the same products promotes mutual understanding and trust. For example, iphone users can always support new buyers about how to make the best use of their phones, and the new gradually share some same concepts and ideas with former users.

    Identical products, however, can have harmful effects as well. For one thing, a country’s history, language and echos are bound up with its manufactured artefacts. With the relentless advance of world brands into every corner of the world, these bland packages might replace the traditional objects in one nation, which is a loss of richness and diversity of cultures. For the other, traditional products, whether these be clothes, utensils, or medicines, provide employment for local people. The fact that people turn to multinational products due to their glamorous character puts craftsmen out

    Therefore, people can enjoy the benefits of cheap and advanced products as well as having a deep understanding with others with the spread of multinational products, but countries also need to pay attention to the protection and revival of their traditional products due to  their unique value for cultures and employment.

     

    December 16, 2022 at 3:16 pm

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    sunshine
    University: zhejiang university of technology
    Nationality: China
    December 17, 2022 at 3:16 am

    It is clear that the same products are now available nearly all over the world. People seem to share an increasingly similar life with these products. For me, the phenomenon is beneficial to some extent, but brings some detrimental impacts meanwhile.

    The same products are so prevalent worldwide because of certain reasons. First, they are normally of good quality and affordable prices. The manufacturers of these goods are equipped with cutting-edge technology and professional knowledge, which ensures their products’ quality and affordability. They also challenge the dominance of the local producers, thereby lowering prices and benefiting local customers. Besides, the practice of using the same products promotes mutual understanding and trust. For example, iPhone users would share similar concepts and ideas with other users by using the same system and apps.

    Identical products, however, can have harmful effects as well. For one thing, a country’s history, language and echos are bound up with its manufactured artefacts. With the relentless advance of world brands into every corner of the world, these bland packages might replace the traditional objects in one nation, which is a loss of richness and diversity of cultures. For another, traditional products, whether these be clothes, utensils, or medicines, provide employment for local people. The fact that people turn to multinational products due to their glamorous character puts craftsmen out of work.

    Therefore, people can enjoy the benefits of cheap and advanced products as well as have a deep understanding of each other with the spread of multinational products, but countries also need to pay attention to the protection and revival of their traditional products because of their unique value for cultures and employment.

    December 19, 2022 at 2:40 am

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    Identical products, however, can have harmful effects as well. For one thing, a country’s history, language and echos are bound up with its manufactured artefacts. With the relentless advance of world brands into every corner of the world, these bland packages might replace the traditional objects in one nation, which is a loss of richness and diversity of cultures. For another, traditional products, whether these be clothes, utensils, or medicines, provide employment for local people. The fact that people turn to multinational products due to their glamorous character puts craftsmen out of work.

    Therefore, people can enjoy the benefits of cheap and advanced products as well as have a deep understanding of each other with the spread of multinational products, but countries also need to pay attention to the protection and revival of their traditional products because of their unique value for cultures and employment.

    December 19, 2022 at 2:44 am

    Partial revision [ All sentences are unclear.]