Some people say that governments should spend money on measures to save languages that are used by few speakers, while others believe it’s a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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  • zhoubohan
    University: suzhou university
    Nationality: china
    March 19, 2020 at 12:19 pm

    Some people say that governments should spend money on measures to save languages that are used by few speakers, while others believe it’s a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

    People have different views about whether governments fund for languages of few speakers is a worthy thing or government is doing a meaningless thing.I totally support governments should protect scarce languages from a dangerous situations.

    Governments put money on languages of few people would save them.Firstly,once languages of few speakers get governments help,more and more people will notice them and find these languages are more fantastic than they thought and may begin to learn them.Languages are always integrate with the culture.The developments about language of few speakers  can put the precious culture in motion .Besides,languages of few speakers can let people rediscover the beauty of world.Because languages involve lots of memories .For example,the part of past beautiful scenery of mountains and lakes or traditional ways of living are depicted by rare languages.

    Meanwhile,saving languages of few speakers would put enormous strain on government’s financial resources,it would cost government’s much money .If governments care languages of few people too much will limit the development of other aspects like environmental pollution ,medical care ,social welfare and so on . what’s worse ,It’s not convenient for people in routine work speaking in languages of few speakers.The fading of languages of few speakers is inevitable outcome of social evolution .

    In conclusion,the internal value of the languages of few speakers is higher than economic value.The protection of languages of few people by getting the budget from governments is need and must on the basis of the social harmony.

    March 20, 2020 at 3:10 am

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    2. About 25% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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