Integrated writing-the sea otter

  • LeahToday
    University: BLCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    September 12, 2021 at 4:25 am

    The passage and the lecture talk about the cause of the sea otter’s population decline. The passage suggests that pollution is the main cause while the professor thinks predators is.

    The passage says that pollution is the main reason for the decline because there are found evidence on the coast and water test shows the rising existence of chemicals that are bad for the sea otter’s health. While the professor thinks since no dead body was found along the coast, it is more likely that the sea otter is eaten by other animals and there will be no carcass found if so.

    In the passage, the author believes that since other animals are also affected, pollution is more liable as it has an overall effect than predators. However, the professor argues that due to the hunting of large animals like whales, predators shift their goal to smaller animals like the sea otter. It is this that counts for the population change.

    The author also states that ocean wave movements and other factors of the environment can explain the regional difference in the sea otter’s population. On the other hand, the speaker says that because predators’ large size, areas where they find it difficult to prey are places where sea otter population remains stable, so animals who eat sea otter is the main reason.

    September 13, 2021 at 10:25 am

    The passage and the (delete) lecture talk about (discuss) the cause of the sea otter’s (sea otter) population decline. The passage suggests that (delete) pollution is the main cause while the professor thinks predators is (are the culprit).

    The passage says that pollution is the main reason for the decline because there are found evidence on the coast and water test shows the rising existence of chemicals that are bad for the sea otter’s health. While the professor thinks since no dead body was found along the coast, it is more likely that the sea otter is eaten by other animals and there will be no carcass found if so.

    In the passage, the author believes that since other animals are also affected, pollution is more liable as it has an overall effect than predators. However, the professor argues that due to the hunting of large animals like whales, predators shift their goal to smaller animals like the sea otter. It is this that counts for the population change.

    The author also states that ocean wave movements and other factors of the environment can explain the regional difference in the sea otter’s population. On the other hand, the speaker says that because predators’ large size, areas where they find it difficult to prey are places where sea otter population remains stable, so animals who eat sea otter is the main reason.

    September 13, 2021 at 10:25 am

    Partial Revision (please fix similar errors, edit whole essay, and resubmit)

    LeahToday
    University: BLCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    September 13, 2021 at 11:18 am

    The passage and lecture discuss the cause of the sea otter population decline. The passage suggests pollution is the main cause while the professor thinks predators are the culprit.

    The passage says that pollution is the main reason for the decline because there are found evidence on the coast and water test shows the rising existence of chemicals that are bad for the sea otter’s health. While the professor thinks since no dead body was found along the coast, it is more likely that the sea otter is eaten by other animals and there will be no carcass found if so.

    In the passage, the author believes that since other animals are also affected, pollution is more liable as it has an overall effect than predators. However, the professor argues that due to the hunting of large animals like whales, predators shift their goal to smaller animals like the sea otter. It is this that counts for the population change.

    The author also states that ocean wave movements and other factors of the environment can explain the regional difference in the sea otter’s population. On the other hand, the speaker says that because predators’ large size, areas where they find it difficult to prey are places where sea otter population remains stable, so animals who eat sea otter is the main reason.

    September 13, 2021 at 8:25 pm

    The passage and lecture discuss the cause of the sea otter population decline. The passage suggests pollution is the main cause while the professor thinks predators are the culprit.

    The passage says that pollution is the main reason for the decline because there are found evidence on the coast and water test shows the rising existence of chemicals that are bad for the sea otter’s health. While the professor thinks since no dead body was found along the coast, it is more likely that the sea otter is eaten by other animals and there will be no carcass found if so.

    In the passage, the author believes that since other animals are also affected, pollution is more liable as it has an overall effect than predators. However, the professor argues that due to the hunting of large animals like whales, predators shift their goal to smaller animals like the sea otter. It is this that counts for the population change.

    The author also states that ocean wave movements and other factors of the environment can explain the regional difference in the sea otter’s population. On the other hand, the speaker says that because predators’ large size, areas where they find it difficult to prey are places where sea otter population remains stable, so animals who eat sea otter is the main reason.

    September 13, 2021 at 8:27 pm

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