Some people believe that it is an important part of a child’s education to go on field trips (for example, to museums). Others think that a child’s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Some people believe that it is an important part of a child’s education to go on field trips (for example, to museums). Others think that a child’s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  • jackifun
    University: Xiamen University
    Nationality: China
    October 21, 2021 at 3:54 am

    Some people believe that it is an important part of a child’s education to go on field trips (for example, to museums). Others think that a child’s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    Most families attach great importance to a child’s education. Some parents think it is better for a child to go on field trips, while other parents believe that studying in the classroom is a better choice. In my opinion, spending time learning in a classroom is beneficial for the child.

    Admittedly, going on field trips such as museums can help the child to learn. For example, the child is readily impressed by the fantastic antiques in the history museums. In addition, there are expert persons translating the history stories behind the antiques. Therefore, the child will learn history knowledge with interest and enthusiasm. However, I am still in favor of the view that children can learn better in a classroom.

    In the first place, children can study with many peers in school. Encouraged by peer pressure and competition, children will study hard to surpass other students in the classroom. For instance, my sister Jane who is in primary school does not study hard at first. The teacher tells her that she can get a reward if her grades improve. Stimulated by the potential of the reward, she begins to study industriously from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m. every day without being distracted by the mobile phone. At the end of the semester, she indeed had her grades elevated rapidly. In this case, studying in a classroom can encourage children to learn actively.

    In addition, children can learn a great deal of knowledge as teachers are good at different subjects with helpful pedagogy. To be more specific, teachers know how to attract children’s attention by talking jokes or playing games with children, and so on. For instance, when I was a child, my teacher taught me to sing English songs by watching videos. I sang with the character in the video while dancing. As a result, I became interested in English. Therefore, I do agree that studying in the classroom is helpful to children’s education.

    In a nutshell, all the preceding discussion warrants an unshakable conclusion that studying in school is favorable for child education.

    October 21, 2021 at 4:55 pm

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    jackifun
    University: Xiamen University
    Nationality: China
    October 22, 2021 at 1:01 am

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    Most families attach great importance to a child’s education. Some parents think children should go on field trips, while other parents believe that studying in the classroom is a better choice. In my opinion, spending time learning in a classroom is beneficial for the child.

    Admittedly, going on field trips such as museums can help the child to learn. For example, the child is readily impressed by the fantastic antiques in the history museums. In addition, expert persons are translating the history stories behind the antiques. Therefore, the child will learn history knowledge with interest and enthusiasm. However, I am still in favor of the view that children can learn better in a classroom.

    In the first place, children can study with many peers in school. Encouraged by peer pressure and competition, children will study hard to surpass other students in the classroom. For instance, my sister Jane who is in primary school does not study hard at first. The teacher tells her that she can get a reward if her grades improve. Stimulated by the potential of the reward, she begins to study industriously from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m. every day without being distracted by the mobile phone. At the end of the semester, she indeed had her grades elevated rapidly. Consequently, she became interested in study and the highest achieving student in her class. In this case, studying in a classroom can encourage children to learn actively.

    In addition, children can learn a great deal of knowledge as teachers are good at different subjects with helpful pedagogy. To be more specific, teachers know how to attract children’s attention by talking jokes or playing games with children, and so on. For instance, the teacher can teach children English with funny videos. When I was a child, my teacher taught me to sing English songs by watching videos. I sang with the character in the video while dancing. As a result, I could sing English songs after watching videos only three times and became interested in English. Therefore, I do agree that studying in the classroom is helpful to children’s education.

    In a nutshell, all the preceding discussion warrants an unshakable conclusion that studying in school is favorable for child education.

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    October 22, 2021 at 1:27 pm

    Most families attach great importance to a child’s education. Some parents think children should go on field trips, while other parents believe that studying in the classroom is a better choice. In my opinion, spending time learning in a classroom is more beneficial for the child.

    Admittedly, going on field trips such as museums can help the child to (children) learn. For example, the child is readily (children are) impressed by the fantastic antiques in the (delete) history museums. In addition, expert persons are translating (experts have translated) the history stories (delete) behind the antiques. Therefore, the child (children) will learn history knowledge (delete) with interest and enthusiasm. However, I am still in favor of the view that children can learn better in a classroom.

    In the first place, children can study with many peers in school. Encouraged by peer pressure and competition, children will study hard to surpass other students in the classroom. For instance, my sister Jane who is in primary school does (did) not study hard at first. The teacher tells (told) her that she can get a reward if her grades improve (improved). Stimulated by the potential of the reward, she begins to study (studied) industriously from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m. every day without being distracted by the (her) mobile phone. At the end of the semester, she indeed had her grades elevated rapidly (significantly improved her grades). Consequently, she became interested in study (studying) and became the highest achieving student in her class. In this case, studying in a classroom can encourage children to learn actively.

    In addition, children can learn a great deal of knowledge as teachers are good at different subjects with helpful pedagogy (delete). To be more specific, teachers know how to attract children’s attention by talking (making) jokes or playing games with children, and so on (delete). For instance, the teacher can teach children English with funny videos. When I was a child, my teacher taught me to sing English songs by watching videos. I sang with the character in the video while dancing. As a result, I could sing English songs after watching videos only three times and became interested in English. Therefore, I do agree that studying in the classroom is helpful to children’s education.

    In a nutshell, all the preceding discussion warrants an unshakable conclusion that studying in school is favorable for child education.

    October 22, 2021 at 1:47 pm

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