Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  • HayleyMarshall
    University: Soochow University
    Nationality: Chinese
    March 17, 2020 at 9:53 am

    Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    How to deal with bad situations has become a major concern to major. While Some insist that they should adapt to it, others think otherwise, holding that it is better to change such situations. Generally, I believe that people should try to improve bad situations.

    Staying in a bad situation or a long time has an adverse impact on people’s career prospects. Bad situations such as an unsatisfactory job or low wages may hit employees morale. People will be less productive and always make mistakes, which really do harm to companies’ profits. As a result, they may be eliminated when facing a stiff competition ion among Colleagues.

    It is true that some may accept bad situations instead of changing them. It is imaginable that people will invest more time and energy even money when they try to improve it. And they often achieve less than they put in, which is undoubtedly an added insult to injury, especially for those who are already in depressive situations.

    However, I still believe that people who are already in bad situations should try to improve it as you can never succeed without trying. For example, when you lack money, you should find effective ways to earn more money, such as part-time jobs, instead of doing nothing.

    To conclude, people will always be in bad situations without taking actions.

    March 21, 2020 at 11:37 pm

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