Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  • Sarah11
    University: Ewha Ewha Womans University
    Nationality: China
    June 26, 2020 at 2:14 pm

    Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    We may be faced with various obstacles during our life. Some of us choose to accept them, some choose to solve them. Both of these choices have their own reasons.

    When a bad situation happens, most of us will be angry or sad, we will focus on these bad things following, and become powerless. If this situation goes on for a long time, people may get some psychological problems. So the healthier way to think bad situation is just accepting it first, and focus on the opportunity that left.

    But for other people, accepting can not solve problems. If we dont do something, the difficulty will win. And we will lose our hope forever. So they choose to change, to solve this bad situation, they will be rewarded by confidence. They will become more brave. Even they cant solve the problem, they dont have to regret because they`ve already tried their best.

    In my opinion, when there is a bad situation, the first thing we should do is accepting. Then we can solve this problem without any helpless bad emotion. But accepting doesnt mean we just stay there and do nothing about that. We should analysis the situation we are in and find the way to go out of from there. Dont be afraid of failure and just do it. The attitude of never giving up will make our life more interesting.

     

    June 26, 2020 at 11:23 pm

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