It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.

Bunches of (simplify, better word choice needed) unknown events happen all over the world simultaneously. Some regard those happenings as irrelevant ones (delete) which deserve no attention (simplify). From my standpoint, they are worth concern (simplify – one word) (why are they concerning, this introduction is too vague, give examples).

First of all, current affairs indicate the global developmental trends that are valuable for personal decisions. With insistent observing those happenings, we can summarize the rule to have an insightful perception. As we all know, no entrepreneur could succeed without a thorough and profound understanding of the market trends. The sharp sense of canny businessman lets no potential opportunity slip. Likewise, knowing the underlying law prepare us to seize the coming chances. Consequently, we can make correct decisions at t diverges in life.

In addition, looking into surrounding events can fortify our spirit. As looking through those events, we have a glimpse of others’ life experiences and taste the bitterness and joy of them. Those ups and downs teach much about life. Just like the extending limited life span, although we have never actually gone through any events of others’ life, we turn the experience into our life wisdom. Therefore, when facing unpredictable incidents, we can take it all in stride. Ultimately, our innermost feelings are stable, not overjoyed by external gains, and not messed up by personal losses. Consequently, we can respond better to future challenges with a more peaceful and strong mind.

Admittedly, it takes time to know the necessary details of an event happening miles away. However, instead of drawing a tough lesson in the future life or reading biography of past great men which scarcely apply to the present, the experiential wisdom you procure from it is far more worthwhile.

In conclusion, it is significant to know the events around. By gaining an insight into them, both prophets of trend and mental growth are attainable. As it characterizes easy access and a high performance-price ratio, it is fair to apply to self-improvement.

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Plenty of unknown (delete) events happen all over the world simultaneously and most of them are not directly relevant to our life. Some people regard those events with complete unconcern. From my standpoint, those happenings (what “happenings”? this is very unclear) are notable because they benefit both mental growth and decision-making capacity.

First of all, current affairs can partly indicate (predict) global developmental trends that are valuable for personal decisions. By insistently (delete) observing those happenings (events), we can summarize rules and have insightful perceptions. An entrepreneur who knows the (analyzes) industry news and deeply analyzes them (delete) can equip himself with (has) a thorough and profound understanding of the (delete) market trends. Then the understanding lay the foundation of the business acumen that lets no potential opportunity slip away. (delete, redundant) Thereby (Therefore) the canny businessman can succeed thanks to concern about the news. Likewise, paying attention to current events and knowing underlying laws facilitate us to seize coming chances. Consequently, we can make correct decisions at diverges in life. (delete)

In addition, looking into surrounding events can fortify our spirit. As looking through those events, we have (because we can gain) a glimpse of others’ life experiences and taste the bitterness and joy of them. Those ups and downs teach much about life. Just like the extending limited life span (what does this mean?), although we have never actually gone through any events of others’ life, we internalize the experiences so that we can deal with emergencies better. (delete or rewrite this sentence) Therefore, when facing unpredictable incidents, we can take it all in stride. In that case, because we know what to do, our innermost feelings are stable, not overjoyed by external gains, and not messed up by personal losses. Consequently, we can respond better to future challenges with a stronger and more peaceful mind. (needs significant revision)

Admittedly, it takes time to know the necessary details of an event happening miles away. However, instead of drawing a tough lesson in the future life , the experiential wisdom you procure from events happening on others is far more worthwhile.

In conclusion, it is significant to know the events around. By gaining an insight into them, both trend prediction and mental growth are attainable. As it characterizes easy access and a high performance-price ratio, it is fair to apply others’ life experience to self-improvement.