Claim: it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Reason: the reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.

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After[  /Subsequent to ] the scandal of Robert John Downey Jr., and [ as well as  ]drug abuse[word form error   ] by many professional athletes, some people believe that media scrutiny will destroy[ could destroy  ] everyone’s reputation[ sweeping statement  ]. However, I disagree with the claim and the reason stated. In my opinion, not everyone’s reputation will be diminished[ unnecessary passive  ] because of media scrutiny.

In contrast to the claim, it is possible for society to regard living men or women as a hero. Guo Tai-Ming, one [ the  ]Taiwanese who is the founder and CEO of Foxconn[ grammatical error  ]. Foxconn is an international company located[  /operating ] in several countries, like America, China, and so on. Foxconn creates millions of jobs around the world and also become[grammatical error   ] the world’s famous and larger provider of electronics manufacturing services. Because of the success of Foxconn, Guo Tai-Ming becomes[ /became  ] a billionaire businessman. But he wasn’t selfish but[ but..but  ] established a foundation to help[  article error ] poor and vulnerable groups for several years. However, this is not the “key” let him[grammatical error   ] being called a hero by the Taiwanese. In 2021, He donated 1,500 million vaccines when the Taiwanese suffered a hard time because of COVID-19, and [grammatical error   ]even didn’t have enough vaccines for everyone then. Even though he founded Foxconn in 1974, he still[ misplaced  ] is regarded as a hero by the Taiwanese. His reputation has not been diminished by media scrutiny for the past 30 years.

I also disagree with the reason,[ punctuation error  ] that the[  article error ] media cannot diminish the reputation of “anyone”, because people have nothing to hide from the media. Furthermore, (people will regard someone)[sweeping statement   ] as a hero because of their great achievements. Take my favorite basketball player, Stephen Curry, for[preposition error   ] example. He has 3 champion rings in NBA and completely changes basketball nowadays with his unstoppable 3-point shot. Despite his private life catching the public’s attention, it[ unclear pronoun  ] doesn’t diminish his reputation, [ grammatical error  ]rather increases his fame because he and his children’s lovely interaction.

In conclusion, the above examples have fully proved that media scrutiny hasn’t and will not diminish anyone’s reputation and many living men and women are still being regarded as heroes.