It would be great if we could stop the lake salt level from increasing and save its fish and bird population. But the solutions you just read about aren’t realistic or practical. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It would be great if we could stop the lake salt level from increasing and save its fish and bird population. But the solutions you just read about aren’t realistic or practical. 

  • Huang TianChen
    University: Shenzhen University
    Nationality: China
    September 26, 2021 at 7:36 am

    It would be great if we could stop the lake salt level from increasing and save its fish and bird population. But the solutions you just read about aren’t realistic or practical. 

    The lecture comments on three methods of solving the increasing salinity of the Salton Sea. She says that all the three methods mentioned in the passage were not likely to happen in reality.
    The first option the passage gave out is to use industrial evaporation to directly take out the salt from the lake. But according to the speaker, dangerous particles will also be taken out from the lake, and when they become uncontrolled, like being blown up by the wind, it’ll become a serious threat to a very large amount of population.

    Secondarily, the passage suggests using pipelines of canals to deliver ocean water into the lake. However, the speaker doubted the ability of the government since the resource needed to build pipelines for such a long distance is quite a big number.

    The third method the passage mentioned is to separate the lake by walls to hold the salt in a small area and control the main area by letting fresh water in. Although thoughtfully very nicely, this program will be destroyed once an earthquake happens, and therefore not supported by the speaker.

    September 27, 2021 at 1:59 am

    Please provide the full, correct essay topic.

    Huang TianChen
    University: Shenzhen University
    Nationality: China
    September 27, 2021 at 2:10 am

    Topic is an essay and a piece of listening record, I have made screenshots and sent them to your wechat. I don’t know how to upload pictures here sorry.

    September 27, 2021 at 2:21 am

    Invalid. [Please complete the revision of your first essay prior to submitting another one.]