Many people believe that the government should increase sports facilities to solve the public health problem, but others think that other measures should be taken to resolve the issue. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Modern lifestyles have led to severe public health problems, which has ( have  )drawn wide attention from both government and individuals. Some people believe that government should increase sports equipment to address concerns about public health ( concerns  )problems, while others disagree with this belief. In my opinion, government should enhance sports facilities and employ other measures to resolve( the issue)(unclear   ).

On the one hand, modern(many   ) people are suffering from occupational diseases for the lack of(less   ) exercise. ( missing transitory word  )Government should implement the policy of establishing ( expand  )more sports infrastructures to help people wrestle with these common diseases. Increasing the amount of sports equipment in the community and parks, for example, can give the public more opportunities to take exercise. At the same time, the government(be consistent with government/the government   ) can invest more in improving the quality of ( provide more  )public sports resources, which allows the public to enjoy the same sports infrastructure as in the gym.

On the other hand, government should take other measures to help solve public health problems( repetition / challenges  ). The authorities should ensure the residents realize the importance of keeping healthy and popularize the knowledge about how to take exercise more scientifically.( Lengthy, unclear  ) As such, the residents can get rid of unhealthy lifestyles and develop healthy life habits gradually. Meanwhile, government should call for organizations, like communities, schools, and corporations, to host sporting activities more frequently, thus encouraging greater public involvement in physical exercise. With these joint efforts can public health issues be resolved more efficiently.(unnecessary passive   )

In my opinion, government should not only contribute more to increasing the intensity and quality of sports facilities, ( punctuation error  )but also take other measures to resolve the public health issue.( Repetition. No new info provided.  )