Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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There is no doubt that the [The  ]amount of waste which is mainly produced by humans has increased year by year. This essay will examine the reasons and discuss some possible solutions. [summarize reasons and solutions  ]

Firstly, excessive[commodity  ] packaging of goods is one of the main causes [ behind ] of the increase in rubbish [ increase ]. Nowadays, [online  ]shopping online becomes so popular due to its character of convenience that the number of parcels [ being used ] has [risen  ]a dramatic upward trend, of which [ resulting in substantive amount of waste ]packages have become the main waste. In the meanwhile[ Meanwhile ], most of the [  packing]materials that companies[businesses  ] choose for packages[ use ] are non-reusable[ . ] and [Additionally, many  ]individuals have not developed the habit of sorting garbage yet; therefore[Therefore,  ] plenty of[ unrecycled ] packages which cannot be recycled heap up and have a negative effect on [ pollute ]the environment. Next,( with the birth of throwaways)[ ? ], it seems that people prefer to choose those cheap goods with a new look but not reusable, instead of reusing and repairing old ones.[lengthy, unclear sentence  ] As a result, both the old and the used ones[ unclear pronoun ] will be[are/were  ] abandoned, producing more garbage.

Although it[  unclear pronoun] is tough to work out, there are still some feasible solutions for governments. It [unclear pronoun  ]is necessary[imperative  ] to formulate related laws and regulations. For instance, governments are supposed to give a list of manufacturing companies which shows a clear range of material constraints in packages.[ unclear sentence ] Next, governments [ can ]should promote and encourage individuals to separate and recycle waste [using food stamps or similar incentives  ]through some welfare: people can trade used plastic bottles and papers for food and daily necessities. Besides, there could be a[government can impose  ] tax on garbage disposal, which aims at decreasing [ in an attempt to curb ] the amount of throwaway[ s ] consumption.

In conclusion, there are many causes of rubbish increasing certainly such as packages and throwaways[unclear sentence  ], [punctuation error  ]however, governments can curb the growth of waste [via legislative and taxing means  ]by setting laws and making an initiative.