People in communities can make decisions that protect and improve the natural environment. Which ONE of the following three actions is MOST useful for people to do if they want to help the environment in their local community? Why? 1.Plant trees and create parks 2.Persuade local shops to stop 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing People in communities can make decisions that protect and improve the natural environment. Which ONE of the following three actions is MOST useful for people to do if they want to help the environment in their local community? Why? 1.Plant trees and create parks 2.Persuade local shops to stop 

  • lareina lin
    University: 高新区外国语学校
    Nationality: China
    October 14, 2020 at 8:34 am

    People in communities can make decisions that protect and improve the natural environment. Which ONE of the following three actions is MOST useful for people to do if they want to help the environment in their local community? Why? 1.Plant trees and create parks 2.Persuade local shops to stop 

    Natural environment, which closely connect with the human activities, exerts the vital role in everyone life. There is no consensus on the best approach to protect the natural environment. Some people extol the virtues that local stores should stop providing plastic bags to customers. A proportion of people contend that people can take the public transportation actively. But I wholeheartedly support that citizens should plant trees and create the parks.

    In the first place, planting tree can enhance the species diversity. Trees provide a basic life condition for species. Many species like many kinds of insects or birds build their inhabits on the trees, which play an essential role to survive. Therefore, if a certain area doesn’t possess many trees, the local species will in danger and face with the extinction. In addition, trees have the ability to boost the fertile degree of soil. They bring a vast amount of nutrient for soil contributing to raise the plant life. Hence, many kinds of plants also benefit the local animal species. It is important chain to plant trees to gain the balance of ecosystem in order to improve the natural environment. Had people not planted trees, the natural environment would never have the high species diversity.

    Apart from that, creating parks, people will increase the idea about protecting environment. Currently, owing to the development of technology, more and more recreational buildings such as the KTV, movie theater or internet bars are created. Therefore, people are immersed in these so that not worried about the local natural environment. However, building more parks is effective method to recall and teach people how to protect the environment so that improve the idea of the environment. For instance, my friend Tom usually threw the gabages or wasted the food in 8the table in the past. But when his community created a park for the local citizens, he went to there leading to feel the natural life or natural environment closely. In this way, it is through the increase time of going to the park that help him to know value of the local environment.

    October 15, 2020 at 8:59 pm

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    October 15, 2020 at 9:01 pm

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