Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
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March 29, 2020 at 3:43 am
Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Nowadays, the technology is developing at a fast pace, and the media can take advantage of this so that a quantity of scandals get disseminated. Normally, people want to know what recently happen around them and the fastest means is searching scandals on media. Thus, I agree with the claim stated above.
Traditionally, people can update information around them by watching TV and reading newspaper because it is the authoritative way to get access to the information. However, with the origin and the fast development of the internet technology, people are more likely to searching scandals on media to acquire information. That is because human beings need to absorb and work at fast pace to keep up with the development of technology so that they do not have enough time for getting access to those authoritative ways to obtain information. As a result of this, they prefer to accessing to scandals on social media, which could get a number of people discuss about the latest news. While people get access to information by searching scandals, scandals provide them with convenience due to less time consumed. The speaker or reformer can not focus public attention on problems like scandals do.
Besides the convenience of access to information, Scandals always focus on description of process instead of result. Generally, human beings prefer to know the process of what things happen around them instead of the consequence. That is why the action movies always have a large number of descriptions of fighting, which could attract attention and entertain audience. The scandals could offer a number of descriptions of process so that scandals can fulfill the need of human beings and entertain them at the same time. It is no doubt that scandals can get a lot of public attention on social media which no speaker or reformer ever could.
Still some opponents of this claim insist that scandals sometimes mislead public to wrong information even though scandals can get a lot of attention. It is true that sometimes scandals disseminate wrong information, but the claim itself only says they can focus public attention on problems that no speaker of reformer ever could. There is no demand for correctness of information within the scandals. Hence, the opponents can support the claims too.
In short, scandals can attract public attention in ways that no speaker and reformer ever could, because it can offer information to public while in a fast, convenient and interesting way. However, sometimes with large dissemination the cost is error.
March 31, 2020 at 12:40 amScore: 55.8
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March 31, 2020 at 1:21 pmNowadays, technology is developing at a fast pace, and the media can take advantage of this so that quantities of scandals get disseminated. Normally, people want to know what recently happen around them and the fastest means is searching scandals on media. Thus, I agree with the claim stated above.
Traditionally, people can update information around them by watching TV and reading newspapers, because they are authoritative ways to get access to the information. However, people are more likely to searching scandals on media to acquire information with the fast development of Internet technology. That is because human beings need to absorb information and work at the fast pace to keep up with the development of technology. As a result of this, they do not have enough time for getting access to those authoritative ways to obtain information. It leads to that they prefer to search scandals on social media, where a lots people discuss the latest news. Thanks to searching scandals, people spend less time getting access to information which they are concern about. The speaker or reformer can not focus public attention on problems like scandals do.
Besides the convenience of acquiring information, Scandals focus on the description of the process instead of the result. Generally, human beings prefer to know the process of how things take place instead of the consequence. That is why action movies always have a large number of descriptions of fighting, which could attract attention and entertain audiences. The scandals offer a number of descriptions of the process. In the end, scandals can fulfill the need of human beings and entertain them at the same time. It is no doubt that scandals can get a lot of public attention on social media which no speaker or reformer ever could.
Still some opponents of this claim insist that scandals sometimes propagate wrong information to the public. It is true that sometimes scandals disseminate wrong information, but the claim itself only says that scandals can focus public attention on problems that no speaker or reformer ever could. There is no demand for the correctness of information within the scandals. Hence, the opponents can support the claims too.
In short, scandals can attract public attention in ways that no speaker and reformer ever could, because they can offer information to the public in a fast, convenient and interesting way. However, sometimes scandals can propagate invalid information to the public and mislead the citizens.
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