Some people think painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, so they should be compulsory high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, so they should be compulsory for high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The importance of art education is receiving more attention(.  ), and( On this matter, ) some people argue that painting and drawing should be compulsory subjects in high school.( repetition from the prompt ) Although making these relevant ( ? )courses compulsory can bring some benefits, in my opinion, adopting this kind of measure is too radical as now. ( Despite potential benefits resulted from this policy, I am in the opinion that this measure can bring serious consequences such as A and B. )

On the one hand,( Undoubtedly, elevating the importance of art education allows ) students can have( to gain wider ) more access to a well-rounded education by improving the position of art courses in the education system. Painting and drawing are distinct(differ  ) from mathematics or physics (in terms of their educational purposes.  )and ( Specifically, painting and drawing )are associated (relate to  )with a lot of practical training, which can expand students’ skill sets.

The training in sketching, for example, enables students to enhance their ability to capture details. Furthermore, these abilities can influence students in the long run, helping them cultivate a sense of beauty and be better at perceiving objects and things in their lives. If art courses are not compulsory, these benefits would not be realized completely.

On the other hand, however, there are ( compulsory art education )still a (can also lead to  ) series of issues for the measure of compulsory art education. For students, the art education requires a large amount(considerable amounts  ) of time and( , ) effort and, more importantly, the talent. (Compulsory art courses mean that students have to compress the time of learning other subjects to conduct the art training, and the students who are not better at it would feel challenged and frustrated to their studies.)(lengthy sentence  ) In the aspect of society, it is impractical to require ( Requiring )all high schools to implement the measure (remains impractical  ). The art(Art  ) teaching is based on( normally delivered by ) professional teachers( . Such teaching also calls for ) and relevant ( special )education( al ) facilities such as drawing boards, painting rooms, and art models.(This means that many rural high schools  ) For most high schools in the undeveloped regions, it is hard ( would find it extremely challenging )to carry out the complete (effective  )art education due to their poor(limited  ) educational resources, which will aggravate the education inequity and cause further social problems.

Therefore,( In conclusion, ) taking art courses as compulsory subjects needs more thought.