Some People think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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July 31, 2021 at 5:19 am
Some People think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Some people are promoting a controversy topic about the establishment of free libraries in each town, some people, however, convince that it wastes the public finances while we have access to the Internet to gain information at home.
It is reasonable for people to gain more knowledge more conveniently by the establishment of more free libraries. The library not only provides us a comfortable and quiet place to read books, but also creates a harmony atmosphere for the public to aware that we are all desire for gaining more inspiring viewpoints. Most importantly, this produces a invisible force pushing me to read more efficiently and to go further along the academic path which interests me the most. Take me myself for example, I feel bored sooner when I am reading papers at dormitory than in library because I can feel the potential pressure when someone is also studying around me, which accelerate my speed of achieving a high score.
With the fast-pace life prevails, however, it does show the possibility of that many people do not really need a library to attain information with such a fast-developed internet around us. We can just move our fingers, tap the screen of our phones and we will get the answer of whatever we are curious about. We can even get the identical book but the electric version online without moving a single step at home, which does not prevent us from digging deep down into the spirit the author want to express.
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August 3, 2021 at 10:50 amSome people are promoting a controversial topic about the establishment of free libraries in each town, some people, however, are convinced that it wastes the public finances while we have access to the Internet to gain information at home.
It is reasonable for people to gain more knowledge more conveniently by the establishment of more free libraries. The library not only provides us a comfortable and quiet place to read books but also creates a harmonious atmosphere for the public to aware that we are all desire for gaining more inspiring viewpoints. Most importantly, this produces an invisible force pushing me to read more efficiently and to go further along the academic path which interests me the most. Take me myself, for example, I feel bored sooner when I am reading papers at the dormitory than in the library because I can feel the potential pressure when someone is also studying around me, which accelerates my speed of achieving a high score.
With the fast-paced life prevails, however, it does show the possibility that many people do not need a library indeed to attain information with such a fast-developed internet around us. We can just move our fingers, tap the screen of our phones and we will get the answer to whatever we are curious about. We can even get the identical book but the electric version online without moving a single step at home, which does not prevent us from digging deep down into the spirit the author wants to express.
August 4, 2021 at 2:39 amSome people are promoting a controversial topic about the establishment of free libraries in each town[ Write something meaningful ], [punctuation error ]some[ wrong word ] people, however, are convinced that it[ unclear pronoun ] wastes the public finances[ wrong word ] while we [ inconsistent in person ]have access to the Internet to gain information at home.It is reasonable for people to gain more knowledge more conveniently by the establishment of more free libraries. The library not only provides us a comfortable and quiet place to read books but also creates a harmonious atmosphere for the public to aware that we are all desire for gaining more inspiring viewpoints. Most importantly, this produces an invisible force pushing me to read more efficiently and to go further along the academic path which interests me the most. Take me myself, for example, I feel bored sooner when I am reading papers at the dormitory than in the library because I can feel the potential pressure when someone is also studying around me, which accelerates my speed of achieving a high score.
With the fast-paced life prevails, however, it does show the possibility that many people do not need a library indeed to attain information with such a fast-developed internet around us. We can just move our fingers, tap the screen of our phones and we will get the answer to whatever we are curious about. We can even get the identical book but the electric version online without moving a single step at home, which does not prevent us from digging deep down into the spirit the author wants to express.
August 4, 2021 at 2:43 amPartial revision [not qualified for revision due to excessive problems/mistakes.]
August 4, 2021 at 6:28 amPeople have different views about whether the government should establish free libraries in each town. While there are some benefits not to build these libraries, I believe that building them is more understandable.
It is reasonable for people to be desirable to gain knowledge more conveniently by establishing more free libraries in each town. The library provides us not only a comfortable and quiet place to read books but also a harmonious atmosphere for the people inside to fell more accompanied when digging into the knowledge. Most importantly, this produces an invisible force pushing me to read more efficiently and to go further along the academic path which interests me the most. Take me myself, for example, I feel bored sooner when I am reading papers at the dormitory than in the library because I can feel the potential pressure when someone is also studying around me, which accelerates my speed of achieving a high score.
With the fast-paced life prevails, however, it does show the possibility that many people do not need a library indeed to attain information with such a fast-developed internet around us. We can just move our fingers, tap the screen of our phones and we will get the answer to whatever we are curious about. We can even get the identical book but the electric version online without moving a single step at home, which does not prevent us from digging deep down into the spirit the author wants to express.August 4, 2021 at 12:22 pmFinal Revision
People have different views about whether the government should establish free libraries in each town (what are the different views? establish the two sides). While there are some benefits not to build (to not building) these libraries, I believe that (delete) building them is more understandable (why?).
It is reasonable for people to be desirable to gain knowledge more conveniently by establishing more free libraries in each town (rewrite and simplify). The library provides us not only (delete) a comfortable and quiet place to read books and study but also a harmonious atmosphere for the people inside to fell more accompanied when digging into the knowledge (redundant). Most importantly, this produces an invisible force pushing me (people) to read more efficiently and to go further along the academic path which interests me the most (simplify). Take me myself, (delete) for example, I feel more bored sooner (delete) when I am reading papers at the dormitory than in the library because I can feel the potential (delete) pressure when someone is also studying around me, which accelerates my speed of achieving a high score (delete).
With the fast-paced life prevails, (delete) however, it does show the possibility that (delete) many people do not need a library indeed (delete) to attain information with such a (delete) fast-developed (delete) internet around us (available). We can just move our fingers, tap the screen of our phones (simplify) and we will get the answer to whatever we are curious about. We can even get the identical book but the electric version (e-books) online without moving a single step at (leaving) home, which does not prevent us from digging deep down into the spirit the author wants to express (rewrite).
