Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified
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August 19, 2020 at 12:28 pm
Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To have a space exploration should spend a lot of money. Producing some equipments and vehicles like rockets and spacesuits also need large-number expense and some extra expense are needed as well. But there are many records about space exploration in many countries. Someone even use rockets to carry human to land on the moon. Nowadays, we can also see the American flags on it.
As we know, to go to the moon, researchers spent several years to research and check machines. So according to this information, both time and money are space exploration’s basic requirements. After 1972, there are no country land on the moon. In addition, making a mini satellite oneself at least need $7000.
Exploring space is very important for us. I heard that a topic about which planet except the earth we can live and the best choice is the Mars after some discussion, but it is still a guess. So to solve this problem, people must use some methods to take the explorer on the Mars and it also needs a lot of money to produce an explorer. But effectively, this behaviour has some benefits too. For example, some information and images from the Mars.
I think that developing technology for space exploration isn’t wrong, but people should use money to many different ways, such as education and agriculture. Of course, they can also help some poor men in the mountain area.
August 20, 2020 at 2:27 amScore: ungraded
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August 20, 2020 at 3:25 amTo have a space exploration should spend a lot of money. The expense that producing some types of equipment and vehicles like rockets and spacesuits are main and some extra expense are required as well. But there are many records about space exploration in many countries. Someone even used rockets to carry human to land on the moon. Nowadays, we can also see an American flag on it.
As we know, researchers spent several years on producing spacecrafts and overcame many troubles. So, according to this information, both time and money are space exploration’s basic requirements. After 1972, there are no country land on the moon. In addition, making a mini satellite oneself at least need $7000.
Exploring space is very important for us. I heard that a topic about what else planet we can live and the best choice is Mars after some discussion, but it is still a guess. So, to solve this problem, people must use some methods to take the explorer on Mars. At the same time, it also needs a lot of money to produce an explorer. But effectively, it has some benefits too. For example, some information and images from Mars.
I think that developing technology for space exploration isn’t wrong, but people should spend money on many different ways, such as education and agriculture. Of course, they can also help some poor men in the mountain area.
August 20, 2020 at 11:53 amTo have a space exploration should spend a lot of money [logical confusion ]. The expense that producing some types of equipment and vehicles[word choice error ] like rockets and spacesuits are main[unclear ] and some extra expense [ word form error ]are required as well. But there are many records about space exploration in many countries[ irrelevant sentence ]. Someone even used rockets to carry human[word form error ] to land on the moon[word form error ]. Nowadays, we can also see an American flag on it.
As we know[ factual inconsistency ], researchers spent several years on producing spacecrafts[ word form error ] and overcame many troubles. So, according to this information[ redundant ], both time and money are space exploration’s basic requirements. After 1972, there are[ grammatical error ] no country land[ logical confusion ] on the moon[word form error ]. In addition, making a mini satellite oneself at least need $7000[ grammatical error ].
Exploring space is very important[use specific instead of vague word ] for us. I heard that a topic about (what else planet we can live and the best choice is Mars after some discussion)[ wordy ], but it [unclear pronoun ]is still a guess. So, to solve this problem[ what problem? ], people must use some methods to (take the explorer on Mars)[ unclear ]. At the same time, it[ unclear pronoun ] also needs a lot of money to (produce an explorer)[confusing ]. But effectively, it[ unclear pronoun ] has some benefits too. For example, some information and images from Mars[ logically incomplete ].
I think that (developing technology)[logical confusion ] for space exploration isn’t wrong, but people should spend money on [wrong preposition ]many different ways, such as education and agriculture. Of course, they can also help some poor men in the mountain area.
August 21, 2020 at 1:13 amThere are many ways we can develop technology, but all ways must be spending a lot of money and this money rests on countries’ provision. So, space exploration is a classic example.
As we know, the first step to explore space, we must produce some types of equipment like rockets and explorers. After that, researchers will test equipment in many different situations and they must overcome a lot of trouble on these equipment. So, these two steps just spend more than 6200w dollars. This number of money is ample to help other ways like agriculture. It can help farmers to complete fruits and vegetables’ yield and earn more money. In addition, some situations are to carry astronauts to explore space, this way must keep rockets safe all time. But there are still some accidents, such as the HMS Challenger. So, some countries provided insurances for astronauts and per insurance’s amount are at least 500w dollars. These are extra money people must prepare.
But in another hand, space exploration also has some benefits. For example, the equipment can gather some vital information and images from space or the other planet. So, these materials can help experts to research astrology and it has effects to develop technology as well. Nowadays, some countries invented space stations, this carrier is costlier than rockets, satellites and explorers. It shows our scientfic level is higher and our requirement become higher too.
Overall, to make technology better, whatever ways, we must spend a lot of money on it and it will be gaining a good result at last, but we can’t only take notice of single respect.
August 21, 2020 at 1:26 amThere are many ways we can develop technology, but all ways must be spending a lot of money and this money rests on countries’ provision. So, space exploration is a classic example.
As we know, the first step to explore space, we must produce some types of equipment like rockets and explorers. After that, researchers will test equipment in many different situations and they must overcome a lot of trouble with these equipment. So, these two steps just spend more than 6200w dollars. This amount of money is ample to help other ways like agriculture. It can help farmers to complete fruits and vegetables’ yield and earn more money. In addition, some situations are to carry astronauts to explore space. This way must keep rockets safe all the time. But there are still some accidents, such as the HMS Challenger. So, some countries provided insurance for astronauts and per insurance’s amount is at least 500w dollars. These are extra-money people must prepare.
But on the other hand, space exploration also has some benefits. For example, the equipment can gather some vital information and images from space or the other planet. So, these materials can help experts to research astrology and it has effects on developing technology as well. Nowadays, some countries invented space stations. This carrier is costlier than rockets, satellites and explorers. It shows our scientific level is higher and our requirements become higher too.
Overall, to make technology better, whatever ways, we must spend a lot of money on it and it will be gaining a good result at last, but we can’t only take notice of single respect.
August 21, 2020 at 1:27 amHello, tutor, please look the second reply
August 21, 2020 at 1:10 pmThere are many ways we can develop technology, but all ways must be spending a lot of money and this money rests on countries’ provision. So, space exploration is a classic example.
As we know, the first step to explore space, we must produce some types of equipment like rockets and explorers. After that, researchers will test equipment in many different situations and they must overcome a lot of trouble with these equipment. So, these two steps just spend more than 6200w dollars. This amount of money is ample to help other ways like agriculture. It can help farmers to complete fruits and vegetables’ yield and earn more money. In addition, some situations are to carry astronauts to explore space. This way must keep rockets safe all the time. But there are still some accidents, such as the HMS Challenger. So, some countries provided insurance for astronauts and per insurance’s amount is at least 500w dollars. These are extra-money people must prepare.
But on the other hand, space exploration also has some benefits. For example, the equipment can gather some vital information and images from space or the other planet. So, these materials can help experts to research astrology and it has effects on developing technology as well. Nowadays, some countries invented space stations. This carrier is costlier than rockets, satellites and explorers. It shows our scientific level is higher and our requirements become higher too.
Overall, to make technology better, whatever ways, we must spend a lot of money on it and it will be gaining a good result at last, but we can’t only take notice of single respect.
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