Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
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September 27, 2019 at 3:10 pm
TOEFL Writing Topic: Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
People tend to imitate successful examples of others to avoid potential risks. That is the reason why successful people are so rare. Most people cannot create new things or thoughts. They just do what successful people do. But successful people will always try to avoid following the current trend and find their special way to make their thought come true. Actually, successful people create the trend.
Doing what people already know never leads to success. Its reason is quite simple. If everybody knows how to do things well, you cannot succeed by doing so. You cannot invent a thing if it is not new. People work so hard to pursue their accomplishment and will not leave any chance to others if they know how to make it though. Nobel Price will only award the first discoverer. In this case, you must be the first one to figure it out. In business world, if something is profitable, you, at least, must not be the last one to know it; otherwise you will not get any profit.
The biggest winner must run the risk of lost and do what have not been done, since larger risk comes with huger profits. Everyone who is familiar with stock market will understand this saying. In fact, big adventure can scare many potential competitors. For instance, most beautiful women always do not have many competitors as assumed by common sense. Their beauty seems to scare off many young men who think he may lose in the competition of chasing.
We all know new things can bring unexpected rewards sometimes. However, not everyone have the chance and capability to try new things and afford its cost. Sometimes we just need to keep our minds open to discover new chance and be brave enough to take the risks.
October 2, 2019 at 2:07 amTOEFL Writing Topic: Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
Score: 80.4
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October 2, 2019 at 8:10 amversion II:
People tend to imitate successful examples of others to avoid potential risks. That is the reason why successful people are so rare. Most people cannot create new things or thoughts. They only do what successful people do. But successful people will always try to avoid following the current trend and find their way to make their thought come true. Actually, successful people create trends.
Doing what people already know never lead to success. Its reason is quite simple. If everybody knows how to do things well, then you cannot succeed by doing so. You cannot invent a thing if it is not new. People work so hard to pursue their accomplishments and will not leave any chance to others if they know how to make it though. Nobel price will only award the first discoverer. In this case, you must be the first one to figure it out. In the business world, if something is profitable, you, at least, must not be the last one to know; otherwise, you will not get any profit.
The biggest winner must run the risk of loss and do somethings new, since bigger risk comes with bigger profits. Everyone familiar with the stock market will understand this. Big adventure can scare many potential competitors. For instance, most beautiful women always do not have as many competitors as its horse sense. Their beauty seems to scare off many young men who think he may lose in the competition of chasing.
We all know new things can bring unexpected rewards sometimes. However, not everyone has the chance to try new things and afford its cost. Sometimes we need to keep our minds open to discover new chances and be brave enough to take the risks.
October 5, 2019 at 9:42 pmScore: 80.5
I will send you screenshots to illustrate problems/issues concerning your essay.
Regards,
Lin Qiu
October 6, 2019 at 5:45 amversion III:
People tend to imitate successful examples of others to avoid potential risks. That is the reason why successful people are so rare. Most people cannot create new things or thoughts. They only do what successful people do. But successful people will always try to avoid following the current trend and find their way to make their idea come true. Successful people create own direction.
Doing what people already know never leads to success. Its reason is quite simple. If everybody knows how to do things well, then you cannot succeed by doing so. You cannot invent a creation if it is not new. People work so hard to pursue their accomplishments and will not leave any chance to others if they know how to make it through. Nobel price will only award the first discoverer. In this case, you must be the first one to figure it out. In the business world, if something is profitable, you, at least, must not be the last one to know; otherwise, you will not get any profit.
The biggest winner must run the risk of loss and do something new, since high risk comes with high return. Everyone familiar with the stock market will understand this. Huge adventure can scare many potential competitors. For instance, most beautiful women always do not have as many competitors as people’s horse sense. Their beauty seems to scare off many young men who think he may lose in the competition of chasing.
We all know new things can bring unexpected rewards sometimes. However, not everyone has the chance to try new things and afford its cost. Sometimes we need to keep our minds open to discover new opportunities and be brave enough to take risks.
