Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  • susugd
    University: Shandong University of Science and Technology
    Nationality: Chinese
    October 20, 2020 at 1:40 am

    It is hard to deny that the amount of money famous sports professionals earn thousandfold more than the counterpart a normal person will have, which leads impressionable people generate the opinion that it is unfair. However, such a statement suffers from both factual and logical fallacies. As far as economy and fairness are concerned, I believe that successful sports professionals deserve to earn such a tremendous amount of money.

    First of all, we should recognize that sports stars have commercial influence, the value they created during games far more than the money given by their company. As we all know, sports become a central topic among all the citizens’ routine lives with the help of the advanced technology. It allows us to watch a live match which would happening the other side of the earth.Billions of people love to watch sports games and have their own fancy stars. Thus, advertisement companies would advertising their products through media during the break time of a game. It worked well all the time since sports fans are crazy about almost every thing related to their idols. Thanks to the famous athletes, they effectively promoted the economy growth.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that sports stars should not be paid too much. Ironically, before they get famous, they do repetitive strenuous work over and over again to fit physical demanding in games, they work out their muscle to run faster and jump higher for years, which seems to be impossible for any of us to lead a life full of exercising. Additionally, they have to deal with obstacles head on. Sports can be risky sometimes, so they might be terrible injured which might finish their sports career even they got very well-prepared before the match. It is a job consuming their lives and bodies to earn money. From this perspective, it would be unfair to them if they cannot get well paid.

    In conclusion, successful sports professionals get well paid is fully justified whichever in terms of economy or fairness.

    October 21, 2020 at 3:49 pm

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