Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  • kevinQAQ
    University: CDU
    Nationality: China
    November 5, 2020 at 2:19 am

    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

     

    Today, many teachers not only teach us knowledge, but also sometime they will have some social or political views. Some people think it is benefit to our students. But I disagree, I will explain in my following essay.

     

    Initially, teachers should not make their social or political views know to students in the classroom, because it has very bad effect to himself in pubic space. If teacher has the mistake about government, maybe he has to lose his job and his family should be affected also. For instance, when I was a high school student, my teacher was a open-minded man. He often have negative comment to others, but he did not care for it. Once day, he said some bad words for our government, and my classmate talked with others that my teacher had some bad behaviours to hometown. As you can see, my teacher was fined and lose his job. Which is can be expected. Anyway, I mean that every teacher does not have social or political views in the pubic space. It is harmful to himself and students, I hope every teacher have good life and his future.

     

    Secondly, I think it is no deny that has negative effect to student if teacher has social or political views in the classroom. Because the teacher has bad views in the classroom and teacher makes mistake, many students also will make mistake. Taking my history teacher, Mike as example, he always said Ms.Mao does a bad job to china, he is not a bad leader, he can do better. It has bad impressive to our students. Many students believe that Ms.Mao has negative effect to China.  All of us think Ms.Mao is not good leader, but it is no doubt that Ms.Mao is greatest head in our Chinese history, so it is so bad consequence to our students and teacher.

     

    As you can see, I really hope teacher does not have social or political view in the classroom. Not only have bad effect to himself. But also it will let students have mistakes.

    Administrator
    University: University of Wisconsin
    November 6, 2020 at 5:21 pm

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
    2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
    3. Spelling errors
    4. Explain why you disagree shortly in your introduction
    5. Article errors
    6. Preposition errors

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    kevinQAQ
    University: CDU
    Nationality: China
    November 10, 2020 at 9:38 am

    Nowadays, many teachers not only teach us knowledge, but also sometime they will share some social or political views with students. Some people think it is benefit to our students. But I disagree, I think it is so harmful for students and himself. I will explain in my following essay.

     

    Initially, teachers should not make their social or political views know to students in the classroom, because it has very bad effect to himself in pubic space. If teacher has the mistake about government, maybe he has to lose his job and his family could also be affected. For instance, when I was a high school student, my teacher was a open-minded man. He often has negative comment for others, but he did not care for it. Once day, he said some bad words for our government, and my classmate talked with others that my teacher had some bad behaviour to hometown. As you can see, my teacher was fined and lose his job. Which is can be expected. Anyway, I mean that every teacher does not have social or political views in the pubic space. It is harmful to himself and students, I hope every teacher have good life and his future.

     

    Secondly, I think it is no deny that has negative effect to student if teacher has social or political views in the classroom. Because the teacher has bad views in the classroom and teacher makes mistake, many students also will make mistake. Taking my history teacher, Mike as example, he always said Ms.Mao was disadvantages for country, he was not a bad leader, he need correct his mind. It has bad impressive to our students. Many students believe that Ms.Mao has negative effect to China. All of student think Ms.Mao was not good leader, but it is no doubt that Ms.Mao is greatest header in our Chinese history, so it is so bad consequence to students and teachers.

     

    In summary, it is no wonder that teacher does not have social or political views in the classroom. Not only have bad effect to himself. But also it will let students have wrong mistakes.

    Administrator
    University: University of Wisconsin
    November 13, 2020 at 4:54 pm

    Score: 67

    Issues:

    1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
    3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
    4. Article errors
    5. Spelling errors

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    kevinQAQ
    University: CDU
    Nationality: China
    November 16, 2020 at 11:59 am

    Nowadays, many teachers not only teach us knowledge, but also sometime they will share some social or political views with students. Some people think it is benefit to our students. But I disagree, I think it is so harmful for students and himself. I will explain in my following essay.

     

    Initially, teachers should not make their social or political views know to students in the classroom. Because it has very bad effect to himself in pubic space. If teacher has the mistake about government, maybe he has to lose his job and his family could also be affected.

     

    For instance, when I was a high school student, my teacher was a open-minded man. He often has negative comments for others, but he did not care for it. Once day, he said some bad words for our government. Therefore, my classmate talked with others that my teacher had some bad behaviour to hometown. As you can see, my teacher was fined and lost his job. Which is to be expected. Anyway, I mean that every teacher does not have social or political views in the pubic space. It is harmful to himself and students, I hope every teacher have good life and his future.

     

    Secondly, I think it is no deny that has negative effect to student if teacher has social or political views in the classroom. Because the teacher has bad views in the classroom and teacher makes mistake, many students also will make mistake.

     

    Taking my history teacher, Mike as example, he always say Ms.Mao was disadvantages for country, he was not a bad leader, he need correct his mind. It had bad impressive to our students. Many students believed that Ms.Mao has negative impact for China. All of student think Ms.Mao was not good leader, but it is no doubt that Ms.Mao is greatest header in our Chinese history, so it is so bad consequence to students and teachers.

     

    In summary, it is no wonder that teacher does not have social or political views in the classroom. Not only have bad effect to himself. But also it will let students have wrong mistakes.

    Administrator
    University: University of Wisconsin
    November 20, 2020 at 3:08 am

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