Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.

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  • xbf
    University: shanghai university
    Nationality: china
    September 17, 2020 at 7:30 am

    Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.

    As far as technology, economy and culture are concerned, I strongly hold that teachers are less valued now.

    First and foremost, the functions of teachers are not as important as before because the development of technology. For one thing, these devices are far more convenient, students can learn their professional knowledge and enhance their skills everywhere. For another, teachers’ knowledge is limited compared to computer, so students can learn more things if they choose to learn from computer, which means more and more students will prefer to teach without the help of teacher. As a result, less time are able to take to communicate with teachers, which lead to less respect.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers is not the same and usually there are many problems in teachers which are harm to students’ study indicates teachers seem like useless. Take the case of my English teacher in Fengcheng high school, a typical school in our country. He was an excellent teacher. However, in order to earn more money he began to teach a large amount of students off school and he charged a large amount of money. Instead of finding ways to solve the problems, he just did nothing. As a result, all students have no progress in study and he became the worst teacher in our school. Therefore, there are many teachers like this make people unrespectful.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still of importance because they can tell students how to study and computer can’t do this. Ironically, the methodology teachers use will have different influences on different students, and the quality of teaching skills can’t be secured. if the government take no measures to control the qualified standard of teacher, there will have many kinds of problems, for example, corruption. All in all teachers’ roles are partly replaced by other things which means they are not valued and appreciated as before.

    September 17, 2020 at 9:34 pm

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    xbf
    University: shanghai university
    Nationality: china
    September 20, 2020 at 12:34 am

    Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.

     

    As far as technology, economy, and culture are concerned, I extremely hold that teachers are less valued now.

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because of the development of technology. For one thing, students could learn their professional knowledge and enhance their skills everywhere since these devices are tremendously convenient. They would save substantial time and money commuting to and from school, which means they are easier to achieve learning success. For another, students are able to know more information easily by using electrical equipment compared to teachers. It means students can learn things well more efficiently without the help of teachers. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before so that they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers varies from good to bad. Some irresponsible teachers may corrupt the reputations and fames because of temptation of money. Take the case of my English teacher in Fengcheng high school, a typical school in our country. He was excellent and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll too many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees as pursuing higher income. Instead of finding ways to improve the quality of classes, he did nothing. At last no progress can be found in student performances, so he was no longer respected. Therefore, teachers seem less respectful as before.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t offer this kind of help. Ironically, the method teachers teach will have different influences on different students. Besides, the quality of teaching skills is not secured. If government takes no measure to control qualified standard of teachers, lots of problems like corruption will emerge. In a nutshell, the role of teachers is partly superseded by other things, and this replacement can conductive to less respect and attention.

    October 1, 2020 at 2:53 am

    Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.

    As far as technology, economy, and culture are concerned, I extremely hold that teachers are less valued now[ this sentence makes no sense  ].

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because of the development of technology. For one thing, students could learn their professional knowledge and enhance their skills everywhere since (these devices)[  unclear ] are tremendously convenient. They [ unclear pronoun  ]would save substantial time and money commuting to and from school, which means they [unclear pronoun   ]are easier to achieve learning success. For another, students are able to know more information easily by using electrical equipment (compared to teachers)[ logical confusion  ]. It [unclear pronoun   ]means students can learn things (well more efficiently)[ redundant  ] without the help of [/from   ]teachers. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before [punctuation error   ]so that they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers (varies from good to bad)[ unclear  ]. Some irresponsible teachers may corrupt the reputations[ word form error  ] and fames[ word form error  ] because of [ article error  ]temptation of money. (Take the case of my English teacher)[wrong phrase   ] in Fengcheng (high school)[ upper case error  ], a typical school in our country. He was excellent and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll too[redundant adverb   ] many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees( as pursuing higher income)[ unclear  ]. Instead of finding ways to improve the quality of classes[ word form error  ], he did nothing. At last [punctuation error   ]no progress can[ tense error  ] be found in student performances[ word form error  ], so he was no longer respected. Therefore, teachers seem less respectful as[wrong preposition   ] before.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t offer this kind of help. (Ironically, the method teachers teach will have different influences on different students. Besides, the quality of teaching skills is not secured. )[sentences lack coherence   ]If government takes [ grammatical error – subjunctive  ]no measure to control qualified standard of teachers, lots of problems like corruption will [  grammatical error ]emerge.

    In a nutshell, the role of teachers is partly superseded by other things, and this replacement can conductive to [grammatical error   ]less respect and attention.

    xbf
    University: shanghai university
    Nationality: china
    October 5, 2020 at 4:05 pm

    Nowadays education plays an increasing significant role in our society. Such a fact may mislead impressionable people to generate the idea teachers are more respectful and important than before. However, as far as technology, economy, and culture are concerned, I think teachers are less valued now.

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because of the development of technology. For one thing, students could learn professional knowledge and enhance skills everywhere since advanced devises like computers are tremendously convenient. Pupils would save substantial time and money commuting to and from school, which could be beneficial to achieve learning success. For another, students can learn things without the help of teachers since they are able to know more information easily using electrical equipment. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before, so they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers varies differently. Some irresponsible teachers may corrupt the reputation and fame because of economic issues such as temptation of money. Take the case of my English teacher Alex in Fengcheng High School. He was excellent and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees as pursuing more wealth. Instead of finding ways to improve the quality of class, he did nothing. At last, no progress could be found in student performance, so he was no longer respected. Therefore, teachers seem less respectful than before.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t offer this kind of help. Ironically the quality of teaching skills is not secured, so the method they teach may not work. What’s worse, low-quality teachers could have negative influence on students. Students probably spend more efforts and get less results.

    In a nutshell, the role of teachers is partly superseded by other things, and this replacement will result in less respect and attention.

    October 5, 2020 at 7:45 pm

    Score: 57.5

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    xbf
    University: shanghai university
    Nationality: china
    October 6, 2020 at 4:47 am

    Now education plays an increasingly significant role in our society. Such a fact may mislead impressionable people to generate the idea teachers are more respectful and essential than before. However, as far as technology, economy, and culture are concerned, I think teachers are less valued now.

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because of the development of technology. For one thing, students could learn professional knowledge and enhance skills everywhere since advanced devices like computers are tremendously convenient. Pupils would save substantial time and money commuting to and from school, which could be beneficial to achieve learning success. For another, students can learn things without teachers’ help since they are enabled to acquire more information easily using electrical equipment. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before, so they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers varies differently. Some irresponsible teachers may corrupt the reputation and fame because of economic issues such as the desire for money. Take the case of my English teacher Alex in Fengcheng High School. He was excellent and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees as pursuing more wealth. Instead of finding ways to improve the quality of his class, he did nothing. At last, students made no progress in their studies, so he was no longer respected. Therefore, teachers seem less respectful than before.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t offer this kind of help. Ironically the quality of teaching skills is not secured, so the method they teach may not work. What’s worse, low-quality teachers could have a negative influence on students. Students probably spend more effort and get fewer results.

    In a nutshell, the role of teachers is partly superseded by other things, and this replacement will result in less respect and attention.

     

    October 8, 2020 at 9:11 pm

    Now education [Education ] plays an increasingly significant role in our society[ explain why  ]. Such a fact may mislead impressionable[unclear word   ] people to (generate the idea)[ replace with one verb  ][that   ] teachers are more respectful and essential than before. However, (as far as technology, economy, and culture are concerned, I think teachers are less valued now)[unclear   ].

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because of the development of technology. For one thing, students could learn professional knowledge and enhance skills (everywhere)[ absolute writing  ] since advanced devices like computers are (tremendously convenient)[unclear   ].[lack coherence from the last sentence   ] Pupils would save substantial [amounts of   ]time and money [in/on   ]commuting to and from school, which (could be beneficial to)[  replace with one verb ] achieve learning success. For another, students can learn things without teachers’ help since they[unclear pronoun   ] are enabled to [ could readily  ]acquire more[ more ..than  ] information easily using electrical equipment. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before, so they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers varies differently. Some irresponsible teachers may (corrupt the reputation and fame)[ unclear  ] because of economic issues such as the [ their unrestrained  ]desire for money. (Take the case of)[ wrong phrase  ] my English teacher Alex in Fengcheng High School. He was excellent[ vague word  ] and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees as[unclear word   ] pursuing more wealth. Instead of finding ways to improve the (quality of his class)[unclear   ], he did nothing. At last, students made no progress in their studies, so he was no longer respected. Therefore, teachers seem less respectful than before.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t offer this kind of help. Ironically[ punctuation error  ] the quality of teaching skills is not secured, so the method they[ unclear pronoun  ] teach may not work. What’s worse[ Worse  ], low-quality teachers could (have a negative influence on)[replace with two words   ] students. Students probably spend more effort[ word form error  ] and [ but  ]get fewer results.

    In a nutshell,[ In conclusion,  ] the role of teachers is partly superseded by (other things)[unclear   ], and this replacement will result in (less respect and attention)[ unclear  ].

    xbf
    University: shanghai university
    Nationality: china
    October 12, 2020 at 8:55 am

    Education plays an increasingly significant role in our daily life because people need to learn more to adapt the society. Such a fact may mislead easily influenced people to believe that teachers are more respectful and essential than before. However, take technology and teachers’ quality into consideration, I think fewer people rely on teachers now.

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because of the development of technology. For one thing, students could learn professional knowledge and enhance skills almost everywhere since advanced devices like computers are tremendously convenient to provide lessons. Also, pupils would save substantial amounts of time and money in commuting to and from school, which benefits learning success. For another, students can learn things without teachers’ help since young learners could readily acquire information using electrical equipment. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before, so they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers varies differently. Some irresponsible teachers may corrupt their reputation and fame by receiving undesired money because of the unstrained desire for money. Take my English teacher Alex in Fengcheng High School for example. He was proficient and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees for pursuing more wealth. Instead of finding ways to improve teaching skills and the richness of content, he did nothing. At last, students made no progress in their studies, so he was no longer respected.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t offer this kind of help. Ironically, the quality of teaching skills is not secured, so the method educators teach may not work. Worse, low-quality teachers could spoil students. Students probably spend more efforts but get fewer results.

    In conclusion, the role of teachers is partly superseded by modern technology, and this replacement will result in less praised words and more unwelcome.

     

     

    October 12, 2020 at 3:23 pm

     

    Education plays an increasingly significant role in our daily life because people need to learn more to adapt the society (reword). Such a fact This may mislead easily influenced (word choice) people to believe that teachers are more respectful and essential than before. However, take taking technology and teachers’ quality into consideration, I think fewer people rely on teachers now.

    Firstly, the role of teachers is decreasing because technology is developing so rapidly of the development of technology. For one thing, students could can gain learn professional knowledge and enhance skills almost everywhere since advanced devices like computers and phones are tremendously convenient to provide lessons. Also, pupils would can save substantial amounts of time and money in commuting to and from school if instead they learn using technology, which benefits learning success. For another Secondly, students can learn things without teachers’ help since young learners could can readily acquire information using electrical equipment. As a result, teachers are not as significant as before, so they are less appreciated.

    Furthermore, the quality of teachers varies greatly differently. Some irresponsible teachers may corrupt their reputation and fame by receiving undesired too much money due to greed because of the unstrained desire for money. Take my English teacher Alex in Fengcheng High School for example,. He was proficient and knowledgeable. However, he began to enroll many students and charge exorbitant tuition fees to pursue for pursuing more wealth. Instead of finding ways to improve teaching skills and his teaching the richness of content, he did nothing. At last In the end, his students made no progress in their studies, so he was no longer respected.

    Nevertheless, a voice arises a consensus argues that teachers are still important because they can tell students how to study while computers couldn’t can not offer this kind of help. Ironically, the quality of teaching skills is not secured (word choice), so the method educators teach may not work (rephrase). Worse, low-quality teachers could spoil students. Students probably spend more efforts but get fewer worse results.

    In conclusion, the role of teachers is partly superseded by modern technology, and this replacement will result in less praised words and more criticism unwelcome.

    October 12, 2020 at 3:27 pm

    Final revision.