Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  • stray
    University: 中国科学技术大学
    Nationality: China
    February 15, 2020 at 3:34 am

    Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    Just as an old saying in China goes:” one day as your teacher means being your father thoughout life”. We can see the the appreciation of teachers exists all the time. And I think that teachers are more valued than before.

    Obviously,Education is more and more important. A hundred years ago, the primany goal for a person was to survive. My grandpa is a farmer and he worked more than 40 years to plant food for a living.Everyone struggled for more food. But in the 20s century, living can be easily achieved and how to live a better life becomes a queation. Understanding of the world matters. Knowledge for technology is vary important. The sentence:” knowledge changs one’s life” is powerful taday.

    Plus, Teachers have a deeper influence on people than before. When stduents come into adults, they respect their teachers because it is teachers who teach them knowledge and teach them how to be the integrity. In China, everyone needs to take the compulsary study for 9 years so that more people are influenced by teachers.

    Before stepping into the society, the amount of time teachers spent to accompany stduents is more than before. Today working adults are busier than before and the living pressure is larger. Parents have fewer time to share with their chilren and teachers stay with children during the daytime. Take myself for an example, when I studied in senior high school I lived in the school 6 days a week and stay in home only one day a week. My class begin at 7:30 a.m.and finish at 9 p.m.,with teachers accompanying us. With so much time living toghther, I respect my teacher than my parents.

    We usually say that teachers are planters who teach young adults and help them grow. Teachers are more and more important taday. They deserve our appreciation. The society can not value teachers any more.

    February 17, 2020 at 3:50 am

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    stray
    University: 中国科学技术大学
    Nationality: China
    March 5, 2020 at 9:43 am

    <div><span>Question:Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</span></div>
    <div><span>Just as an old saying in China goes:” one day as your teacher means being your father throughout life”. We can see the appreciation of teachers exists all the time. And I think that teachers are more valued than before.
    Education is more and more essential obviously. A hundred years ago, the primary goal for a person was to survive. My grandpa is a farmer, and he worked more than 40 years to plant food for a living. Everyone struggled for more food. But in the 20s century, living can be easily achieved and how to live a better life becomes a question.  The main goal for contemporary people is to learn more technology and skills. The sentence:” knowledge changs one’s life” is powerful today.
    Plus, Teachers have a comprehensive influence on people than before. When students come into adults, they respect their teachers because it is teachers who teach them the knowledge and teach them how to be integrity. In China, everyone needs to take the compulsory study for nine years so that more people are influenced by teachers.
    Before stepping into the society, the amount of time teachers spent to accompany students is more than before. Today working adults are busier than before, and the living pressure is higher. Parents have less time to share with their children ,and teachers stay with children during the daytime. Take myself for example, when I studied in a senior high school I lived in the school six days a week and stay at home only one day a week. My class began at 7:30 a.m.and finished at 9 p.m., with teachers accompanying us. With so much time living toghther, I respect my teacher than my parents.
    We usually say that teachers are planters who teach young adults and help them grow. Teachers are more and more important today. The society can not value teachers, who spread intelligence and convey courage, any more.</span></div>

    March 6, 2020 at 4:11 am

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