The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

In modern society, [ creative  ]ideas play an essential role in developing technology [ could facilitate technological development, which in turn could  ]to solve various [ pressing  ]problems. [ While  ]Thus, many think that the best ideas come from a passionate interest in commonplace things. The statement might be right under certain circumstances. However, I can not go all the way [disagree   ]with the statement since (the best ideas require more than an interest in commonplace things) [repetition/dull   ].

It is undeniable that [ Truly,  ]commonplace things have indeed raised numerous influential ideas [ that arise from life  ]that have a significant [have significantly impacted   ]impact on society. In the 1600s the [The   ] fall of an apple inspired Newton, who discovered [into discovering   ]gravity [ , which subsequently led to his proposal of Three Laws governing mechanics  ] and proposed three laws in mechanics. (With the marvelous discovery, the physics cognition of the majority changed rapidly) [unclear   ].

Observant people enjoy their lives, and they could obtain useful information from the most commonplace things. Additionally, they are capable of comprehending known information in an effort to get the principles [ unclear  ]. In this sense, they could apply the [ scientific  ] principles to solve the problems. They could also help [ thereby helping  ]others to [think and   ] live better and have a better understanding of the world.

Despite commonplace things raised ideas under certain circumstances, they [ Nevertheless, the notion that a causal link exists between innovative ideas and ordinary matters ]might [ be misleading  ]mislead people to specious thoughts. [ To some extent, the  ]The more people insist on these ideas [ unclear  ], the more frustrated they [could become   ] would be. Before the successful flight, the [ The  ]Wright brothers failed many times while trying to build reliable aircraft. They claimed that their imitation of [ that imitated  ]avians is unsuccessful. They finally withdrew the imitation ideas and adopted physics knowledge to complete the [ their  ] first reliable plane. Perhaps looking for inspiration to reach for ideas is easy when it comes to commonplace items. However, [  Apparently, ]commonplace things can [ could  ] mislead us on certain occasions because we can hardly have an overall [ due to our limited scientific  ]understanding of them. Thus the statement that the best ideas come from an interest in commonplace is unconvincing for some cases.

Finally, related [ background  ] knowledge is vital for people to raise [ conceive  ]ideas [in a critical manner   ]. Solving challenging problems requires abundant background knowledge, which is the basis of an deduction. With the observation of commonplace things, people can only [ In general, many people could  ]obtain limited information [ from reasoning  ] which is probably insufficient for [ to support their  ] further reasoning. In some cases, lack of information can [ even  ] lead to wrong conclusions [, which could result in serious ramifications such as X and Y   ]. (People may suffer a lot before they realize their mistakes. To overcome the confusion and correct their mistakes. People can get help from their ancestors by reading books and papers. The prior researchers have solved numerous problems that people are worried about nowadays. For the new issues, however, the existing knowledge might offer help and ideas as well. So an interest in commonplace things only contributes part of the best ideas.) [ wordy/confusing  ]

In summary, we might draw the conclusion [I reckon   ]that the best [great   ]ideas arise partly from an interest in commonplace things. Ideas do come from commonplace things, yet researchers [In many cases, people have to   ]rely more on academic records to guarantee correctness for their thoughts. [ science to harness their thoughts and steer their actions.  ]