The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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  • PolarisLvYiyao
    University: Xiamen University
    Nationality: China
    June 3, 2020 at 1:07 pm

    The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

    The bar chart above provides information on four different kinds of leisure activities engaged in by three distinct groups in Canada: recently arrived migrants from English-speaking countries, migrants from non-English-speaking countries and native Canadians.

    First and foremost, as is observed in this chart, cinema is by far the most popular activity for exactly 70% of non-migrants and 65% of English-speaking migrants. Moreover, migrants born in other countries are also fond of watching a film. By contrast, the theater is least popular for all concerned, with only 10% of migrants born in other countries attending. Besides, no more than 30% English-speaking migrants are keen on going to see a play while 5% fewer Canadians are theater fans.

    Furthermore, over half of non-English-speaking migrants, 37% of Canadians and 40% English-speaking migrants visit the library. Additionally, zoos are visited by half of the English-speaking migrants compared to approximately 35% of non-English-speaking migrants and just over 40% of native Canadians.

    In summary, compared to library and zoo, cinema is highly visited by all three groups while theater is at a discount. This situation is closely related to the social and economic environment in Canada.

     

     

     

    June 4, 2020 at 8:45 pm

    The bar chart above provides information on four different kinds of leisure activities engaged in by three distinct groups in Canada: recently arrived migrants from English-speaking countries, migrants from non-English-speaking countries, and native Canadians.

    First and foremost, as is observed in this chart, (cinema is by far the most popular activity)[logical confusion  ] (for exactly 70% of non-migrants and 65% of English-speaking migrants.)[ logical confusion ] Moreover, migrants born in other countries are also fond of watching a film. By contrast, the theater is the least popular for all concerned, with only 10% of migrants born in other countries attending. Besides, no more than 30% of English-speaking migrants are keen on going to see a play while 5% fewer Canadians are theater fans.

    Furthermore, over half of the non-English-speaking migrants, 37% of Canadians,  and as well as 40% English-speaking migrants visited the library. Additionally, zoos are visited by half of the English-speaking migrants compared to approximately 35% of non-English-speaking migrants and just over 40% of native Canadians.

    In summary, compared to library and zoo, cinema is highly visited by all three groups while theater is at a discount. This situation is closely related to the social and economic environment in Canada.

    June 4, 2020 at 8:57 pm

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