The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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  • Marsh
    University: Nanjing Normal University
    Nationality: Chinese
    July 29, 2021 at 11:17 am

    The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

    The given information shows the figure of(for) visitors to Ashdown Museum compared the previous year with the year after it was redecorated and how satisfied they were about their experience of visiting the museum, during the same two periods.

    To sum up, Ashdown Museum attracted more visitors after its refurbishment, also more visitors felt very satisfied with their visit.

    It is clear from the table chart that the total number of visitors risen, there were only 74,000 people choose to visit that museum before the refurbishment, we can see that visitor increased almost 20000 during the year after redecorated.

    From the second graph, more people felt satisfied and very satisfied when it was redecorated, the percentage of people who felt very satisfied increase from 15% to 35%, and the satisfied proportion constitutes 40 percent. With regard as very dissatisfied people, the number was twice as much as higher than the year after refurbishment, which decreased from 10 % to 5%。

    August 2, 2021 at 2:57 am

    The given information shows the figure of(for) visitors to Ashdown Museum compared (the previous year with the year after it)[ confusing/grammatical error ] was redecorated[grammatical error  ] and how satisfied they[unclear pronoun  ] were about their experience of visiting the museum, during the same two periods.[ unclear ]

    To sum up, Ashdown Museum attracted more visitors after its refurbishment, also more visitors felt very satisfied with their visit.

    It is clear from the table chart that the total number of visitors risen, there were only 74,000 people choose to visit that museum before the refurbishment, we can see that visitor increased almost 20000 during the year after redecorated.

    From the second graph, more people felt satisfied and very satisfied when it was redecorated, the percentage of people who felt very satisfied increase from 15% to 35%, and the satisfied proportion constitutes 40 percent. With regard as very dissatisfied people, the number was twice as much as higher than the year after refurbishment, which decreased from 10 % to 5%。

    August 2, 2021 at 3:00 am

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