There are two kinds of classes offered in the school: small class with fewer students (professors may remember all students’ names), and big classes with more students.

From [During  ] the passing[ word form error ] 22 years of my life, I have attend[ grammatical error ] different kinds of classes (and taught)[ grammatical error ] by different teachers. From my perspective, when I am studying in the classes[ word form error ] with fewer students together[redundant  ] I can (get more decent grades in the tests and perform better in that subject)[ redundant ] .

First of all, the small classes in which teachers can easily remember every student’s name contributes to the improvement of the effect and efficiency of the teaching. Because of the limited time and efforts the teacher can spend on one particular course, with the increasing number of the students, the amount for each one will obviously decrease. It may cause that the teacher cannot have a thorough and comprehensive understanding of the each student. Also, he or she cannot make suitable learning plans for everyone and check their homework fully enough. In addition, the teacher also have to face some possible conflicts and accidents between the students, such as the useless conversations in the class, which will also be more with the increasing number of the students. It definitely influences the efficiency the teaching.

Move rover, under the pressure of the concentration of the teacher in the smaller class, students can study more efficiently and carefully. It can be imagine that mental differences between learning just in front of the professor in the classroom and listening carelessly far from the teacher in large one. When students are in the class, every simple deed and world of them can be caught immediately by the teacher during sitting nearby him or her. As the result, every students will focus on the lecture, which is of great help to the effect of learning. It is same when they are doing assignments since they know that the teacher will check their work carefully.

In conclusion, studying in a smaller class contributes a lot to the students.

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